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Obama: I Should Have Credited Patrick

At a presser today in Ohio, Obama admits error in using some of Deval Patrick's language without crediting him:

"I was on the stump, and, you know, he had suggested that we use these lines," Obama said at a news conference a few minutes ago. "I thought they were good lines. I'm sure I should have [given him credit], didn't this time."

But Obama pushed back pretty hard when asked whether this raised questions about whether his words are his own, as the Clinton campaign has been asking...

"Now hold on a second. I mean, look here, I've written two books. Wrote most of my speeches," he said. "So, I think putting aside the question you just raised in terms of whether my words are my own, I think that would be carrying it too far.

Halperin has much more of the back and forth. Obama's final verdict on the fracas: "I really don't think this is too big a deal."


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A great post on Huffington Post entitled: "The Wolfson Plagiarism Attack Is Ridiculous"

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/bob-cesca/the-wolfson-plagiarism-at_b_87209.html

If Sen. Obama writes his own speeches, as claimed at the presser, how does he answer this question:

Senator Obama -- In your speech on Super Tuesday, perhaps by coincidence, you used key phrases from a 1984 speech by Jesse Jackson (“Our time has come. Our time has come” DNC), a poem by June Jordan (“we are the ones we have been waiting for” -- “Poem for South African Women”), and a song by Norman Hutchins (“a change is coming”) – but you did not credit any of them for the key lines in your speech. Isn’t this the kind of speechwriting that doomed Joe Biden’s presidential campaign in the 1980s, and why should your speeches be held to a different standard?

Hillary's campaign needs an effective launching pad for its slime, its own Drudge. Having a bunch of apparatchiks posting on blogs just won't produce the traction the desperate campaign is seeking.

Great posting! On the money, yes. Yes! Oh when oh when will the media start holding him accountable. Nowadays, you need to subscribe to Factcheck.org or go straight to Hillary's website for her factcheck section to see how many of Obama's plans copied hers only 3 months later. He sees which plans look good and on the fly he pirates them. That's the kind of candidate he is, someone who will suddenly promise this and that, such as granting licenses to illegal aliens, just to win that week's primaries. That's justr bad politics; he himself doesn't have any thought out plans.

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Obama didn't credit Cesar Chavez with the "yes, we can" line, either, but everybody (everybody with a clue, anyway) knew what he was talking about. If you start quoting your sources left and right, it kinda, you know, detracts from the pace of what is, you know, a speech. What do you want, footnotes and a bibliography?

No, this is pathetic grasping at straws by the Clinton camp. It's also definitely, absolutely Rovian -- take an opponent's strength, and do everything, including distorting and lying, to try to turn it into a weakness. Google "Swift Boat Veterans for Truth" for more on this tactic.

Cheers.

I'd just like to point out that I love Barack Obama and he is awsome and there is nothing that he can do that is wrong, because he is Barack Obama.

It's so touching when the Hillary campaign finally finds its voice.

Will the media prove HRC and WJC right and punish him for admitting a "mistake," or will they prove Obama right and allow politicians to admit errors and then move on?

Today, I don't think there is any question that this is all the media wants to talk about (after all, if it's on Drudge, it must be news). But I wonder how many news cycles it will take up.

This is a pretty laughable line of attack coming from the Clinton campaign. It's sampled for nearly every other Democratic campaign, and most clearly from Senator Obama's. Pathetic.


P.S. When are you guys going to work out the kinks in the comment system? I'm tired of logging in multiple times just to post a comment.

Should be "from" not "for" in the second sentence.

I wish had just said it was a pathetic non-issue and left it at that. This "debate" is so stupid it's making the Republicans look like geniuses.


Would Mrs Bill Clinton have made it to the top
if she had to climb through the ranks As Hillary Rodham?

She is basing her claims to the White House on
another person's political career, and not her own.

She is running on Bill Clinton's resume.

One more point, it's not plagarism if Patrick encouraged him to use the line.

It is dishonest to use another's words as if they are your own. That is the plain meaning of plagiarism.
Yes it is understood that politicians, comedians, etc., use others' words but those words are the product of paid writers and in themselves are supposed to be original.
And most people will see Obama's plagiarism as plagiarism, as opposed to, say, borrowing which is why Obama has now admitted that it was wrong but insists no big deal.
Because Obama has made his "voice" and authenticity so central a theme in his candidacy I do see it as important. I see it as quite dishonest.
But forget me, I tend to be a foolish legalist in these matters.
I'm sure that there are a thousand monkeys now doing a Lexus on Obama's speeches; already we see examples of his uncredited "borrowing" from multiple authors bring brought forward.
The only question now is just how prevalent a practice he has made this "borrowing" without attribution.

Get a grip. It's a presidential campaign, not a term paper.

I don't know, man, this is pretty weak argument. I know you support Hillary, but was this an original reason why you didn't like Barry Obama or the latest thing to try and paint him as less of a leader? This is weak to me, and I'm quite a stickler for this in most arenas...but I will agree you should attribute anything you say that isn't original, it's just the rules. FYI, I was a Biden guy and this type of stuff pissed me off too.

OTOH, I'm not sure the Clinton campaign really wants to go down this road...if they find anything, I mean anything, that looks like she lifted part of a speech from anyone...it's going to backfire. I've already seen the "I see an America..." thing she used being brought up. It'll only get worse. Bad move on their part, I think.

Would Mrs Bill Clinton have made it to the top
if she had to climb through the ranks As Hillary Rodham?

Not by running campaigns like she' running now.

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Jesus Christ is this what Hillary's campaign is reduced to? What a joke.

I agree, I wish he would have provided the counter-examples he did to highlight the hypocrisy, released the statement from Deval that eloquently says it all and stopped.

I usually think his political instincts are pitch-perfect, but this time I think he made an error. By saying he shouldn't have done it, when it is a perfectly legit thing, he's giving the press and HRC campaign permission to keep running with it. If he had laughed it off as ridiculous (as with the Kindergarten papers thing) I think it would have either died easier, or backfired on Clinton.

I do not know; maybe this is a gaffe on his part, maybe not. It seems to me that it will be short-lived in any event. Tomorrow either 1) she is going to win or 2) he is going to win. If she wins it will be a "resounding comeback" or some such that will totally dwarf any silly plagirism charges. If he wins it will play as "10 state unbroken winning streak," which is not quite as big a headline as if she wins, but still easily enough to move this story out of the news cycle. As such, this admission by Obama is really only a "mistake" if it leads some late-deciders in WI to go with Clinton. Will it? I have no idea, but we will see how things go tomorrow.

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I'm looking forward to the statement from the Clinton campaign in which they point out that when she said she was "fired up and ready to go", and "yes we can" that she should have attributed those remarks to Obama, since he said them first in the campaign.

Fair is fair, people.

That being said, the Obama campaign underestimated the attention this would get. Score one for the Clinton attack machine.

And can the Clinton campaign guarantee that everything Clinton has said in her speeches (which, according to her, don't mean much anyway) was entirely original? Hello? Howard Wolfson? Are you there?

God I hope that Obama just crushes Clinton in Wisconsin tomorrow and she throws in the towel.

I know it probably won't happen, and I'm all for competition for the nomination, but if this is the kind of crap we're going to be getting for the remainder of this contest then I'm ready to see it end now.

This is typical campaign BS designed to change the story and take the focus off Hillary's losing campaign. Its success is predicated on the media having no sense of context or perspective. As in:

1) Politicians borrow or steal rhetorical lines all the time. That's an entirely different animal than what Joe Biden did -- lift someone else's life story (Neal Kinnock's) as his own. Now, that's plagiarism and inauthenticity.

2) Hillary's borrowed plenty of Obama's lines and rhetorical points. Big deal.

So the question really is this: Will the media incorporate this perspective into its coverage of this manufactured fracas or will it just say, Clinton charged, Obama responded, what will this do to the horse race?

I'm confused. How is this different from using a speechwriter?

I can only believe that Senator Clinton, or someone on her campaign staff, is secretly trying to not only lose the nomination, but also to end her entire career.


As has been pointed out before, the meta-narrative that has been attached to Senator Clinton is that she will "say and do anything" to further her political ambitions. "Attacks" like this ("He 'plagiarized' one of his endorser's speeches..."), such as it can be considered an attack, only further solidify that public impression.


(Plus, the entire thing makes her look like that smart but totally uncool apple-polishing little girl that we remember from junior high school.)


I expected much more competence from Senator Clinton. She is an intelligent woman, no doubt. So, why is she running such a singularly stupid campaign?

Please, stop embarrasing yourself. Go HOME Hillary.

the issue is not that obama didn't write the speech. most politicians use speech-writers. the issue is that some of the phrasing was already used in a speech two years earlier by someone who had given consent. seems like a pretty lame issue.

hillary doesn't write her own speeches, does she? how come no one in the obama camp or in the TPM articles mentioned that?

“For the first time in my adult life, I am proud of my country,” she told a Milwaukee crowd today, i know......just words ....wheres the outrage

Does it matter? Seriously.


The Clinton's are looking to start fires with anything now.

Its time this little race comes to an end, I agree it is getting rediculous.

liam. Stop the sexist Mrs. Bill Clinton meme.

michelle obama:
For the first time in my adult life, I am proud of my country,” she told a Milwaukee crowd today, i know......just words ....wheres the outrage

So the question really is this: Will the media incorporate this perspective into its coverage of this manufactured fracas or will it just say, Clinton charged, Obama responded, what will this do to the horse race?

Honestly, which one do you think CNN will choose? I think its obvious. Unlike many, I don't think (with the exception of FOX) that there's a strong MSM political bias, except toward the facile and lazy.

I guess the "Spaghetti on the Wall" phase of the Clinton campaign has now officially begun.

Considering just last week several economists (not Clinton team) found that he had plagierized Hillary's economic plan....saying if he was their student they would give him an F and expel him....sounds like a pattern is forming....

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You're right, a pattern is developing of the Clinton camp fabricating "plagiarism" charges out of whole cloth as it desperately tries to stage a comeback.

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You know, it's pretty sickening to see this guy Kurtz pushing on the front page again and again the notion that this is a entirely unfair attack on Obama.

It was the accusation of plagiarism more than anything else that brought down Biden's candidacy a number of years back. Was that some evil Republican attack on him? I guess by the crazed bias of Kurtz, it must have been.

I've got to tell you, I see little reason for Democrats who have backed Clinton, or who have even any sympathy for her, or who have a basic commitment to objectivity in journalism, continuing to support TPM as a site.

And yet the true accomplishments of TPM inherently involved a broad set of Democrats. What would have come of the firing of the AGs if TPM had not had major input from readers of all stripes to assemble the broad pattern? What would have come of the push to fight Bush on SS if it had not been for the large group of Democrats backing that effort?

And yet TPM has done nothing but rub into the face of Clinton advocates every negative nuance and story they can come up with, no matter how much of a stretch, and no matter how biased?

Why should any of us support TPM when this campaign season ends? Why should we rally behind you people from here on out? So that at some future date you can once again treat us and our causes like dirt, even though you purport to appeal to all Democrats?

I think this may be the end of TPM as a credible site around which all Democrats may rally. You've had your ugly little way, but there will certainly be consequences.

Would you like some cheese with that whine?

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I see little reason for Democrats who have backed Clinton, or who have even any sympathy for her, or who have a basic commitment to objectivity in journalism, continuing to support TPM as a site.

If it sucks here so much then leave. Seems both TPM and you would be better off for it.

Kurtz is exactly correct, though.

Mark Schmitt, The American Prospect:

I described this a few weeks ago as a "pledge" to participate, but I should not have. Obama's precise statement was, and has always been, "If I am the Democratic nominee, I will aggressively pursue an agreement with the Republican nominee to preserve a publicly financed general election." That's an artful statement, and it's not artful in a "meaning of 'is'" sense -- it's exactly the right answer. A commitment to "preserve a publicly financed election" would have to mean much more than whether both participate in the system. It would require some significant agreement about how to handle outside money, 527s, "Swift Boat"-type attack groups, party money, etc., and other factors that have undermined the last two publicly financed elections, from both sides. It is hardly an evasion to describe this as an agreement to be negotiated, rather than a simple pledge.

So it is a pretty clear statement. Going to public funding unless, for example, there can be complete control of 527's etc. is a highly debateable matter. Which is exactly what Obama said he would do.

Isn't the real point, that the speech was in response to an attack from Clinton/McCain? If he can insert a response from another speech that perfectly addresses the attacks that have been lobbed at him, then that shows that the original attack is nothing but empty and cynical.

It's just another tactic out of the sleazy campaign handbook. When you don't like what your opponent is saying, attack the messenger instead of the message by claiming that they're long on platitudes and short on substance. That wasn't true when they said it about Patrick. It wasn't true when they said it about JFK, and it isn't true when they say it about Obama.

If Clinton and McCain are going to trot out the same vacuous attacks, then why should Obama waste his time reinventing the wheel when his friend, Patrick, has already demonstrated what a silly charge it really is?

Look at that! Honesty! Will Hillary follow suit? Will pigs fly?

It's a speech, not a dissertation for godsake. In persuasive speaking, and most especially in political speeches, people use common themes and catchphrases with no attribution necessary.

Moreover, I've never heard a single candidate attribute his or her speech to the person who actually wrote it--the speechwriter.

Bringing up the word "plagiarism" in this context is really unforgivable.

Obama should not have apologized, although I do agree that he probably should have given credit to Duval--not because it was wrong to use Duval's words with permission, but because he shouldn't give a desperate Clinton campaign any talking points to trump up into a ridiculous manufactured controversy.

I swore that I would support the Democratic nominee no matter what, but I am close to the end of my rope with Clinton. From her campaign's shocking marginalization of Democratic voters (latte liberals, "proud African Americans," Democrats in red states, caucus-going activists) to the idiotic attacks on Obama like this one (and who can forget the kindergarten essay flap?)....things she and her campaign have done directly....I'm getting close to the point at which I cannot support her if she goes on to win the nomination.

Really, when I think of all the time I spent in the 90s explaining to people why Bill Clinton's actions did not, in fact, constitute perjury and/or an impeachable offense, I am sorry that I spent time defending him, because they're no better than the people who accused Bill.

One more thing. Hillary's "I see an America..." line from her Super Tuesday speech? A direct lift from Jimmy Carter: http://www.etsu.edu/cas/history/docs/carterseg.htm

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From ABC's Jake Tapper:

In a conference call just now the Clinton campaign would not guarantee that Sen. Hillary Clinton, D-NY, has never used someone else's rhetoric without crediting them.

I asked Clinton communications director Howard Wolfson and Rep. Jim McGovern, D-Mass, if they could assure the public that neither Clinton nor McGovern has ever done what Sen. Barack Obama, D-Illinois, did when he used the rhetoric of Gov. Deval Patrick without footnoting him.

They would not.

In fact, Wolfson seemed to say it wouldn't be as big a deal if it were discovered that Clinton had "lifted" such language.

"Sen. Clinton is not running on the strength of her rhetoric," Wolfson said.

Hmmmm.

Let's see. It's plagiarism only when Obama does it.

Unintentionally hilarious.

I'm now starting to wonder if the internal polls don't show a bigger Obama lead than what we're getting publicly....this sure was a great tactic on the part of the Clinton campaign to occupy the political media so that they wouldn't focus on...the actual election.

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No, the point is that Obama is predicating the force of his candidacy in a basic way on his rhetoric and persuasive use of words.

If his words aren't even his own, where's the reality of that premise? Where's the authenticity of the strength he himself touts?

Look, any way you look at it, the guy was faking it. Even if Hillary did the exact same thing, he'd be faking it. At bare minimum, two wrongs don't make a right -- or is that concept too hard to understand?

What's certainly true is that Obama is running as if he's the candidate who has NOT been corrupted as has been Hillary. He unlike Hillary, allegedly won't "do anything and say anything" to serve his own narrow ends. If you don't see how lifting lines from someone else and trying to deceive your audience into believing they are your own is cynical in the extreme, then you're just too far gone to argue with. Shouldn't the candidate who affects to moral superiority in his behavior rightly be held to a higher standard, namely their own standards? Isn't that why Democrats always rightly pillory Republicans who engage in sexual shenanigans that Democrats would tolerate in other Democrats? You know, the hypocrisy thing?

I'd like to know from this guy Kurtz why the current criticism of Obama is not a fair one. If you are running as the uncorrupted candidate, why should not clear signs of corrupt behavior be used against you? Or is it just OK with Kurtz that Obama might do something obviously wrong, just because maybe Hillary did something vaguely similar?

I guess for Kurtz, even Obama's obvious sins are OK, because it's Obama who engaged in them.

And who's corrupt if he believes that?

Will you pick the sand out of your vagina and quit whining? Damn. Don't read the site if you think the coverage is slanted. Just as many people have complained about Greg Sargent being pro-Hillary. Where are your rambling manifestos on the state of TPM on that subject?

Is there any other instance where he has done this?

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So let me get this straight, Obama and someone else talk for years about ideas, messages, and rhetoric, and then they use those ideas, then it is plagiarism of themselves?

This is what you are left trying to hang your hat on?

Whose words did Obama take?

First, Hillary's. The accusation of "just words" was hers. (Unless she "plagiarized" them from Patrick's opponent?)
Then the quotes of famous dead men. He did not attribute the quotes to them but I doubt that would be plagiarism.

He did use the same response to the same allegation. When he first addressed the charge he did not use famous quotes until the next day.
Remember the January New Hampshire debate?

Clinton:"So, you know, words are not actions. And as beautifully presented and passionately felt as they are, they are not action.

You know, what we've got to do is translate talk into action and feeling into reality."

OBAMA: "Look, I think it's easy to be cynical and just say, You know what? It can't be done, because Washington is designed to resist change.

But in fact, there have been periods of time in our history where a president inspired the American people to do better.

And I think we're in one of those moments right now. I think the American people are hungry for something different and can be mobilized around big changes; not incremental changes, not small changes.

And, you know, so, the truth is, actually, words do inspire, words do help people get involved, words do help members of Congress get into power so that they can be part of a coalition to deliver health-care reform, to deliver a bold energy policy.

Don't discount that power.

Because when the American people are determined that something is going to happen, then it happens. And if they are disaffected and cynical and fearful and told that it can't be done, then it doesn't.

I'm running for president because I want to tell them, Yes, we can, and that's why I think they're responding in such large numbers."

That was a pretty good off the cuff response. The next day he started responding to that but even more her other infamous comment of the debate

“We don't need to be raising the false hopes of our country about what can be delivered,”

Then as part of his response he used MLK and JFK.

To make it more complex there are old articles in the Boston Globe about their friendship and the similarities of campaigns starting with Obama's 2004 run for Senate that had similarities to Patrick's 2006 campaign when he was questioned about it. They have a decade old friendship.

Obama was at Patrick's rally when he used these quotes. Obama has used the quotes in speeches back to 2004, though rarely together (though he did that also in a New Republic article discussing learning about the power of words as a community organizer.)

So OK...while he didn't use Patrick's words because they were King's and Jefferson's and FDR's but they were put together in Patrick's speech but had also been used by Obama himself in prior speeches and Patrick said he suggested they be used...

He should have attributed them not because it was dishonest but because he should know his opponents will look for anything to use and that others familiar with Patrick's speech might be given pause.

So a flub of sorts? Yes.
Plagiarism that the other campaign specifically charged him with? Not even close. An unfortunate term to use.

And not so smart. There have already been countless displays of lines and slogans Hillary has used from Obama, Bill Clinton and a handful of other politicians. What a dumb game to get into. Will we be seeing this into November?

It justs occurred to me that perhaps the worst example of plagiarism since Biden in 1988 was Bush's plagiarism of Hillary's old boss, Marian Wright Edelman, in labeling his education bill No Child Left Behind. Or maybe "technically" it wasn't because he rearranged her words (Leave No Child Behind).

Bush never gave Edelman credit and he used her words to describe legislation that in practice, if not rhetoric, was certainly not in sync with Edelman's mission.

Yet I don't recall Hillary ever complaining about that. And she was a freshman senator when this happened.

What's worse: Lifting the language of a political opposite to advance policies antithetical to the original author -- or using language a friend and ally originally used, with permission, to advance the cause you both share?

Yes! Oh when oh when will the media start holding him accountable. Nowadays, you need to subscribe to Factcheck.org or go straight to Hillary's website for her factcheck section to see how many of Obama's plans copied hers only 3 months later. He sees which plans look good and on the fly he pirates them. That's the kind of candidate he is, someone who will suddenly promise this and that, such as granting licenses to illegal aliens, just to win that week's primaries. That's just bad politics; he himself doesn't have any thought out plans.


I have been saying this for a long time, Obama's authenticity is highly questionable. It is a big of an ugly irony that while Obama attests that his campaign is not just about lofty rhetoric, he is yet using the same lofty rhetoric from another politician. Barack does not write his own speeches, he performs them. He performs the speeches quite well, well enough to pack in the crowds, but he does not write anything he says. Usually, his main speech writer (who is incidientally is the young 26 year old white man Jon Favreau) often lifts various passages the straight out of the speeches spoken during the 60's civil rights era. If that is all Obama has going for him, just a performance, hwo can we truly expect him to bring about change?

Its funny how Hillary says she wants to talk about the issues but then keeps doing these attacks to keep the focus off the issues.

Clinton is doing what candidates do when they are behind, attack. The point is to pull the leader down to you, not raise you up, which has already failed. What Obama supporters should be doing is to maintain the civility that he tries to show as the face of his candidacy. This will make losing Clinton supporters more likely, not less, to support him in the final election in November. We can't have anyone staying home out of spite, and giving McCain an advantage, if not the election.

Clinton is doing what candidates do when they are behind, attack. The point is to pull the leader down to you, not raise you up, which has already failed. What Obama supporters should be doing is to maintain the civility that he tries to show as the face of his candidacy. This will make losing Clinton supporters more likely, not less, to support him in the final election in November. We can't have anyone staying home out of spite, and giving McCain an advantage, if not the election.

I keep trying to think that HRC is above this kind of nonsense. I am an Obama supporter, but not a Hillary hater. Episodes like this and the non-story "pimped out" business make me think that she fired the wrong campaign staffers.

I mean, seriously, does anyone think that this is plagiarism? She is a smart woman with a tremendous grasp of the details of the pertinent issues in this campaign, and this is what we are talking about?

The question is pretty simple in my mind. Their policies are essentially the same. The main differences are a) he would win in the general, b) he has motivated a new generation of Democrats, and brought them to the voting booths, c) he communicates with large audiences better than anyone I have every seen (too young for Kennedy/Roosevelt/Lincoln, and I try to forget Reagan) and, most importantly, d) his last name is not Bush of Clinton. It is time to move on.

This is a non-story.

Yes it is understood that politicians, comedians, etc., use others' words but those words are the product of paid writers and in themselves are supposed to be original.

So your argument is that even though Obama used the words with permission, with the full approval of someone he worked with regularly on these sorts of thing, and even though every candidate uses the words of their speechwriters without attribution, the problematic aspect of this example is that Patrick wasn't being paid for those words. What a laughable argument.


Hillary wouldn't hesitate to stoop to any level necessary to hurt Obama. If this sort of thing is the best she can come up with, that's good news for Obama. It gives me more and more confidence that he's a good choice to be the Democratic nominee.

Laughable because it is your strawman... another typical low rent argument from the Obama crowd.
Are you really that dense or only pretending?
And is that the very best you can do?
No wonder you think plagiarism acceptable.
You are obviously unable to think for yourself.

Another day, another successful Republican tactic of distracting from the issues. How many posts did TPME waste on this completely ridiculous talking point?

From Desk of

Mark Poison Penn

Breaking news. Stop the presses.

We have discovered that when Senator Obama told his kindergarten teacher that he wanted to become president of the United States some day, he failed to attribute those words to many other children who said those exact same words long before the very ambitious young Obama claimed them as his own.

We are doing further research on how remarkably similar some of his other Kindergarten utterances were to words that were once said by some of the Our Gang children.

I tend to agree that it might have been smart for Obama to rebut with instances in which Sen. Clinton had done the same or equivalent lifting (if a case of her using discussions with a friend could be found rather than wholesale larceny). But there is also a case to be made for his not legitimizing the charge (much less apologizing, as he sort of did). It's absolutely absurd to believe that a stump speech is an original composition. That's not what we ever get, and it's not what most people at a rally want.

There is no ethical question in his having used the rhetorical flourish, but there's a huge one in a desperate campaign using it the way they are trying to.

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You know what I find most disgusting about Kurtz's commentary on this issue, as well as the issue of Obama's backing out of his pledge on public financing?

That there is exactly ZERO acknowledgment in either case that there is something that Obama has done wrong. The ONLY thing the man has to say is to criticize the Clinton campaign for criticizing Obama.

Tell me please, Mr Kurtz, is it an entirely right thing that Obama seems to backing out of his pledge on public financing? Don't you think that if in fact it's OK, you might at least make some stab at trying to excuse what appears to be a flip flop?

And if it's just peachy-keen for Obama to use someone else's words without attribution -- clearly deceiving his audience as to their origin, by acting as if they were his own -- don't you think you are obliged to make out that argument?

Well, I should think that if you weren't a hack, you'd see the problem.

But you are, so you won't.

this is becoming reaaly tired. all the talk about obama is not accounted for, he's not what he says he is,bla bla bla. is this all they can do? I'm very disappointed with clintons.

the reason why I support obama is Hillary Clinton. if obama get elected, whatever he wants to do, the negociation will be between obama and the democrat mojority house, we'll might get what we want. BUT if clinton get elected, whatever she wants to do, it will be a fight between hillary and the right-wing, just like the good old times and nothing would be done...once again.

It's astonishing to me that the very same people who criticize and attack and ridicule Hillary for using cliches that Obama uses are now saying, "What's the big deal?" about Obama using a paragraph from another person's speech.

Those who say it isn't plagiarism because he didn't use the EXACT SAME WORDS apparently never wrote a high school term paper.

Plagiarism, as I'm sure any decent English teacher will explain, is not just about copying the words of another person. In that instance, you surround the sentence(s) with quotation marks. However, even if you change a few words, no longer requiring quotation marks, copying the specific idea of another person -- as Obama did, including the same internal quotations -- requires you to attribute the source.

The possible exception is when quoting something that is so commonly known that attribution is unnecessary (i.e., "We hold these truths to be self-evident...")

But Obama quoting the Constitution, MLK, FDR, et cetera is not the criticism here. It is his use of those particular quotes to make the EXACT SAME point, with almost the EXACT SAME words, that Patrick did.

He did not say, "As my good friend Gov. Patrick has said, words have meaning." That would have been perfectly acceptable.

But then, that might have called into question whether every single word Obama utters is trademarked by him and completely original, as he (or at least his followers) would have us believe.

Has anyone ever claimed everything he says is completely original? Speakers don't just pull these speeches out of thin air. They take hard work and collaboration to deliver an effective speech. Even some of our greatest documents in the US have lifted phrases..."Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of happiness" sounds very familiar to Locke's "Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of property." But I guess you addeessed that and this example is a bit out of date...I'm just trying to figure out why y'all are so pissed about this.

What is the actual beef here? Do you seriously think he's completely fake, that he's completely dishonest? After all, for all the speeches he's given, this seems to be the only one with something wrong with it (and I'm quite sure the Clinton campaign is looking for every little bit they can find)...and I agree, always give credit where it's due and Obama didn't, which he admitted, by the way.

So now that he said it was a mistake...what's the problem?

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Ugh, I wish he didn't do this. Not good. I didn't see plagerism in quoting FDR and MLK. How many people have quoted them? Plagerism? Give me a gd break. I wish he would have come back at the questioners and the clintons as opposed to conceding. Not good.

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A Huffpo post points to a April 2007 noting the similarities in message and oratory between Patrick and Obama. This was at the time of Patrick's speech, which Obama attended.

http://www.boston.com/news/nation/articles/2007/04/16/patrick_obama_campaigns_share_language_of_hope/?page=1

Also, there is much debate about Kennedy's famous line "Ask not what your country can do for you..."
The Kennedy library in fact addresses it.
http://www.jfklibrary.org/Historical+Resources/Archives/Reference+Desk/Derivation+of+Ask+not+what+your+country.htm

It notes that Van Wyck Brooks' New England: Indian Summer (1940) contains remarks made by the Mayor of Haverhill, Massachusetts at the funeral of John Greenleaf Whittier in which is the following: "Here may we be reminded that man is most honored, not by that which a city may do for him, but by that which he has done for the city."

The point of course is that even familiar words can be adapted to a specific time and place, framed in context that enriches them, and gives them unique meaning and power in the moment.


Sorry, but I don't think you're getting it. It's not that he used the words of MLK and FDR without attribution. It's that he used the words of Gov. Patrick without attribution.

I doubt anyone is surprised that "I have a dream" are not Obama's words. But I do believe it is suprising to know that the ENTIRE point, which he supported by using the quotations of other famous people, was itself lifted from Gov. Patrick (who, I'm sorry, is not such a famous person, or famous orator, that his speech is automatically recognizable and therefore does not require attribution).

No, you don't get it. What he was borrowing was not a carefully crafted philosophical treatise. He was borrowing a simple rhetorical technique from a friend. (What were the copied words in question? "Just words." -- not a huge amount of plagiarism there.)

A rhetorical technique is not a big deal. It's just a general argument to a specific kind of attack, a methodology that works -- and that can obviously be shared among like-minded people. Kind of like Democrats who say stuff like "John McCain wants to stay in Iraq for 100 years." It's simply a talking point. Or Hillary chanting, "Yes We Can!"

these 2 men are friends, and have been for 10 years. Obama was attacked by the Clintons in virtually the same way that Patrick was attacked by his opponent during his race. the 2 men talked about it, and Obama decided that Patrick's defense was the best route. he used it.

anyone who can derive "plagiarism" from this situation an unthinking troll, and exactly the kind of person the Clinton campaign wants to exploit less than 24 hours before the voting begins.

I am not an "unthinking troll," thank you very much.

I depends on what the meaning of plagiarism is.

I = It

Sorry.

cheating and dishonesty is wrong unless Obama does it. Very cute.

From NPR's the Plank today:

Stumping in New Hampshire last December, Obama said:

"But you know in the end, don’t vote your fears. I’m stealing this line from my buddy (Massachusetts Gov.) Deval Patrick who stole a whole bunch of lines from me when he ran for the governorship, but it’s the right one, don’t vote your fears, vote your aspirations. Vote what you believe."

http://blogs.tnr.com/tnr/blogs/the_plank/archive/2008/02/18/obama-s-quot-plagiarism-quot.aspx

No, he should not have credited Deval.

But I do hope that Senator Clinton credits each speech writer and campaign surrogate that writes or suggests every line in her speeches.

Yeah, it might do a little short-term damage -- which is what The Clintons are best at. But soon there will be a YouTube video showing all the borrowed phrases in Hillary's speeches. I've already seen a few on the news; no doubt there'll be more. (Not that I think anything's wrong with such "sampling" on the stump -- just that her making a big deal about it will come back to haunt her.)

Yeah, it might do a little short-term damage -- which is what The Clintons are best at. But soon there will be a YouTube video showing all the borrowed phrases in Hillary's speeches. I've already seen a few on the news; no doubt there'll be more. (Not that I think anything's wrong with such "sampling" on the stump -- just that her making a big deal about it will come back to haunt her.)

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This incident really demonstrated an important difference between the candidates, and what it might tell us about how each would govern and work with others.

Obama, hearing the criticism about his variant use of Deval's rebuttals to similar charges of 'only words', actually was able to listen to the criticism; and though he thought the criticism was 'not a big deal', he allowed that 'he should have given Duval credit'.

Take Barack's actual listening and then allowing points to another's point of view...... and compare it, if you will, to what we have all witnessed in Hilllary's rigid give-no-inch response to earnest dismay about her war vote.

I'm glad Obama finally admitted that he should have given Patrick credit - which is more than most of his fans can do. Only I wonder whether he's made the concession because it became an issue, or whether he knows he did the wrong thing. Because this isn't an isolated example.

As to whether the words are his own or he's merely using other people's words to create a certain affect in his audience. When people make an idea their own they will put it into their own words, to reflect their own sincere and unique feelings and convictions. That is how they make it their own. But that isn't what Obama did. He used the same words and the same examples as Patrick. He was using words for their proven affect on an audience, which Patrick had already demonstrated, and not because he had thought very deeply about it and was able to offer any examples or words of his own.

RE: "Nowadays, you need to subscribe to Factcheck.org or go straight to Hillary's website for her factcheck section to see how many of Obama's plans copied hers only 3 months later. He sees which plans look good and on the fly he pirates them."

At least Obama had the sense not to pirate Hillary's original support of the occupation of Iraq :-) !!

Obama has credited many other's in his speeches, just not everytime. If he did, he would get monotonous. If I was him I would just publish a blanket list of references on his web site and state publicly to the right-wing corporate media and the candiaite of the pharams and hedge-fund managers (Hillary) to see there for all past and future references.

I don't think he's completely dishonest or disingenous. I just think he's a politican -- a fact that seems completely lost on the screaming fans (including the media).

Do I agree with the majority of his political positions? Sure. Do I think that he says many things that are true and right? Sure. Do I think that he is pure light and goodness? No. Do I think he has all the answers to all our problems? No.

Obama is a politician. And what I've seen of politicans, in both parties, is that they are deeply flawed. Yes, I admire some more than others, but if the Democrats have taught us anything since November 2006, it's that even those with whom we more often agree are capable of disappointing us with their tendency toward political expediency and even cowardice. I voted a straight Democratic ticket in 2006, and I've been disappointed ever since.

And I believe even the great Obama has shown these characteristics at times (i.e., "borrowing" someone else's speech because it is convenient, and voting to fund a war he so strongly opposes). Yes, I like a lot of what he has to say, but that doesn't mean, despite what his supporters seem to think -- despite what he seems to think of himself -- that he somehow transcends politics and partisanship. He doesn't.

In your opinion. About 9.5 million people, to this point, disagree.

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Agreed. O is a politician, and highly imperfect. I'm with you (to a point) on the war funding -- excuse me, OCCUPATION funding -- vote. I'm even more with you on disappointment in the Democrats since 2006. I not only voted the ticket, I sent money, I canvassed, I worked phone banks. I stayed overnight two nights in Stockton to work for McNerney. I allowed myself to hope, and instead I got... Nancy Pelosi and Harry Reid and Jay Rockefeller and... well, you get the point.

But this "plagiarism" thing is just silly. It's a SPEECH. You want a bibliography and footnotes? Those go over reeeeal good in speeches. You think he should footnote Cesar Chavez (of blessed memory) every time he says "Yes, we can"? You think Chavez would mind if he didn't? Get real. Get annoyed about important stuff. This ain't it.

Disagree with what, exactly?

Are Deval Patrick and Barack Obama the same person?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRSVsUvqb_Q

c'mon Josh - it's not about the plagiarism, it's about the lifting of an entire campaign strategy that was used for Deval Patrick - of course, the people of MA bought into it the first time, and then when Obama cam around sellin the same oil, they took a pass and gave Clinton a 15 point win! Obama isn't the ONE - he's just another politician.


the reason this writer supports Obama is because of the way he thinks about issues, not his "lofty rhetoric". I read AUDACITY OF HOPE and several speeches before I ever heard him give a speech. What is compelling about the man is that he is self-confident enough to not think that he has all the answers. The attacks on him for being full of himself are ridiculous - it's Clinton who thinks she is God's gift to the country.

Clinton was given the responsibility for health care reform in '93 and she screwed it up. Yeah, the Republicans helped, but she gave them an opening when Dems had all the advantages. She was secretive. She was dismissive of those with opposing views. She thought she had all the answers. She thought her command of the minutae (sp?) of details about her plan made her the best prepared. Her campaign staffers are afraid to tell her that money is running low because she is so intimidating.

Obama has not had much executive experience either, but when he has had it, people have spoken well of him. Conservatives at the Harvard Law Review say he clearly was left of center, but was respectful of their views. His own campaign is an example of how he does things differently.

I am so tired of politics as usual. Please give me some hope that we can look at old problems in a new way. Clinton will not give us that - she, like Bill, will triangulate and obfuscate and fight passionately over small issues that promote her political fortunes. Enough!!

Your thoughts are very close to mine. I'm certainly too cynical to think Obama is a perfect individual or the savior of the country. I think he makes mistakes and I think he's definitely a politician...but he's a talented politician. And I respect the way he approaches issues and how he tries to sell them to the public. He doesn't shy away from his policies deficiencies, but recognizes them and explains the costs and benefits associated with them. That's how government should work. Neither party has perfect solutions to our problems, so instead of trying to say one's policies have no problems, identify and acknowledge them and move forward with your principles guiding the way. Some disagree, but I think Obama does that.

I haven't seen this cult thing his detractors speak about nor anyone referring to Obama other than inspirational among his supporters. Mindless loyalty is a bad thing to me. But it's quite obvious there are people on both sides who can find nothing wrong with their chosen candidates.

I'm not so sure the Clintons are completely devoid of principle, but they certainly don't have the capital to admit a mistake or problem with a policy and still be able to move forward, even if they wanted to. Their enemies (in both parties) would eat them alive and they know it. That's what shapes their political acumen more than anything IMO. A constant defensive posture is not a good way to push strong liberal policies.

remember, there's a debate on wednesday night. as i see it, the main reason clinton is slinging so much mud is that it doesn't matter whether or not it holds up--she's just looking for fresh soundbites to use as ammunition on wednesday. it doesn't matter if any of her claims are of consequence. all that matters is that hillary tarnishes obama's halo with attack after attack on wednesday night.

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