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Hillary Campaign: Obama Plagiarized Speech From Supporter

The Clinton campaign is busy pushing a new line of attack against Barack Obama: That he plagiarized a section of his speech this past weekend at the Democratic Party of Wisconsin dinner, from a speech given two years ago by Massachusetts Gov. Deval Patrick, a prominent Obama supporter. Here's a side-by-side comparison:

More after the jump.

The Clinton campaign argues that this act of plagiarism fundamentally, along with the current arguments about taking public financing, seriously undermine Obama's candidacy. "So if you're asking the electorate to judge you on your promises and you break them, and on your rhetoric and you lift it," argued campaign spokesman Howard Wolfson on a conference call with reporters, "there are fundamental questions that are raised about that campaign and that candidacy."

Election Central asked Wolfson about comments in this morning's New York Times from Patrick himself, who said he freely exchanges speech ideas with Obama and didn't think a citation was necessary. Wolfson said the plagiarism charge still holds because listeners go in with the assumption that Obama's speeches are original, unless credit is given. "So I think it's fine that Deval Patrick said that," Wolfson said. "But what I'm concerned about is that the public has an expectation that Sen. Obama's words are his own."

The Obama campaign also sent us further comment from Patrick. "Senator Obama and I are long-time friends and allies. We often share ideas about politics, policy and language," Patrick said. "The argument in question, on the value of words in the public square, is one about which he and I have spoken frequently before. Given the recent attacks from Senator Clinton, I applaud him responding in just the way he did."


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What the MEDIA isn't telling you is that both Patrick and Obama plagiarized directly the words of JOHN KENNEDY, the founding FATHERS, Martin Luther KING!! WAKE UP media!

That's right. Time to bring back from the dead Thomas Jefferson so that he can sue Obama for plagiarism.

Hello, these are iconic words that everyone is EXPECTED to recognize... go back to bed and get up on the OTHER side next time.

I don't even HAVE a bed. The MEDIA wants it that way!

Sidewalk, dumpster, wherever you sleep.

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Dude.

He's joking.

He's joking, but you just revealed your soul. Please don't tell me you support Hillary.

Here's Taylor Marsh on the Obama con.

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/taylor-marsh/i-have-a-dream-becomes-_b_87199.html

I can't wait until we get back to beating the crap out of the Republicans instead of each other.

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I can't wait until we get back to beating the crap out of the Republicans instead of each other.

Uh-huh.

One sentence and one link further up:

Here's Taylor Marsh on the Obama con.

Riiiight.

I think you just revealed your soul.

Oh, sorry. Do I need to credit that? My bad.

So, let me get this straight.

Obama uses Patrick Deval's words in a speech and doesn't cite them.

Patrick Deval said the use was fine, no citation necessary.

Clinton's press flack has none of it, saying in essence "I don't care what the guy whose words were used, we still require a citation!"

To Taylor Marsh and Billy Glad, this is an Obama con.

I get it now.

When Clinton communications director Howard Wolfson was asked if he could assure the public that Clinton has never done what Obama did when he used the rhetoric of Gov. Deval Patrick without footnoting him, he would not.

In fact, Wolfson seemed to say it wouldn't be as big a deal if it were discovered that Clinton had "lifted" such language.

"Sen. Clinton is not running on the strength of her rhetoric," Wolfson said.


Sometimes I wonder if Howard Wolfson is the reincarnated Iraqi Minister of Information (except that Mark Penn makes equally absurd statements).

The difference is that the general public already knows who first spoke those words, and so citing them would be superfluous. I dare say the people Obama gave to the speech to in Milwaukee, Wisconsin did NOT know the same speech was given by a candidate in the race for governor of Massachusetts two years earlier. That's why it's plagiarism - because Obama knowingly deceived his audience and played upon their ignorance to enhance his own image as a man with fresh ideas.

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Talk about desperate measures...

I think that the Clinton campain is now resorting to throwing everything at Obama to see what, if anything, will stick? Seems pretty desperate to me!

Goes along with their new message of the day strategy...

Good lord. They are really just throwing everything they can at Obama.

Look out, here comes the kitchen sink!

Just when you thought that the issues at stake in this election could not get any smaller or more trivial...

Well, I tip my hat to the Clinton campaign. I thought that the great "who played the race card first" debate was the most ridiculous distraction from the real issues that this campaign could achieve, but evidently I was wrong.

Yes, how dare anyone speak negatively of your god, Obama the wanna be-president!

How dare they!!

LOL

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Another fine, substantive, 10-cent post from Rae.

Good job!

Isnt it very clear that Hillary keeps plagiarizing

SOMINEX!

LOL. If this is all they have, I think Obama must be in better shape then I thought. I cannot wait for the Obama people to produce side by sides of Clinton using "fired up, ready to go" and basically taking lines and message from Obama (and Edwards for that matter). This also plays right into the "she will say or do anything" to win storyline. I think they are hoping this is Joe Biden 1988, I think it is more the girl who cried wolf.

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Ask, and ye shall receive.

Disclosure: I'm an Obama guy.

But that seems like a reach to me.

Oh my. Now quoting JFK, the Declaration, and FDR is foul play? This is beyond sad, Mr. Penn. But not unexpected. Desperate times call for desperate measures.

In politics, there's no such thing as plagiarism. The night of Hillary's New Hampshire win, she took the stage and launched into a verbatim rip off of everything Obama had been saying--change, hope etc.

LOL!!!!

I'm awaiting the gloves to come off in the Democratic primaries.

If I were the Obama camp I would be testing and crafting an attack or rebutal to Clinton in the next debate that was not sexist, was not cruel, but effectively closed the deal on the race.

The candidate that effectively executes that strategy and leaves the stage with the memorable comment upon the other in the public's mind will be the winner.

If I were Clinton I would keep slinging mud, all types of mud, and keep Obama talking about mud.

LOL


Keep throwing everything at obama if you can hillary... we need to win.... if we have to get ugly do it... the republicans do.

You do realize that Hillary needs Obama's supporters to win in November, right? And when she calls his supporters cultists and creepy, it doesn't really, you know, help her. She's just giving McCain all kinds of fodder to use in the general. "My opponent says that red states aren't important, Obama supporters are creepy, African-Americans aren't important - well, I think they're important and I'll try my hardest to win their votes." Hillary may still win the nomination but she's doing everything she can to lose the general.

Yes and Obama needs Hillary's supporters to win in Nov. Go back and read some of the attack made on her by his supporters and then tell me what your point.

I am very interested to see how Obama responds to Hillary's attack day, as I think this is exactly the kind of thing that Republicans are going to do in the general. Personally I think they are grasping at straws in an effort to show that 1) Obama is an unauthentic flip-flopper and 2) he isn't as good of a speaker as everyone says he is. But thats where he is going to be hit so lets see how he handles it.

But it's sad to see Hillary's campaign trail taking her through Republican land on the way to TX and OH.

The definition of plagiarism is the unauthorized use or close imitation of the language and thoughts of another author and the representation of them as one's own original work.

From everything I've read, Governor Patrick has fully authorized Obama to use these words.

And it is not like he is stealing someones thesis, he is echoing a fair argument that words DO matter.

"But what I'm concerned about is that the public has an expectation that sen. Obama's words are his own."

This is one of the dumbest attacks I've ever heard. All the candidates have speechwriters. Is Hillary really making the argument that she writes all her speeches herself? Of course not.

This is almost as dumb as the Kindergarten thing. They later said that was a joke, so maybe they'll say the same thing about this.

They are in full out pasta mode. Throw everything in the bowl at the wall to see if anything at all sticks.

This has been an interesting two month slow motion trainwreck on the part of the Clintons.

In a follow-up interview, Mr. Wolfson expanded the attack: "We understand that long passages of other speeches weren't even written by Mr. Obama - they were apparently ghostwritten by his staff. Mr. Obama has been publicly taking credit for his oratorical gifts, while exploiting the intellectual property of these undercompensated workers."

Pressed by reporters, who suggested that this was standard practice, Mr. Wolfson riposted: "Standard practice? I thought that Mr. Obama stood for the politics of change - and once again, we find him giving us more of the same. But what I'm most concerned about is that the public has an expectation that Sen. Obama's words are his own. And now we learn that's not the case. Can we trust anything he says?"

He also added a parting shot: "The Obama campaign will try to spin this any way they want, but if this were Senator Clinton, we all know you'd be reporting the scandal. I think they'd be better off just accepting responsibility for this and moving on."

Sorry, and I accused Penn. Wolfson is a moron. This thing has less traction than the bald tires on my 1988 Accord.

I actually think these kind of sleazy, baseless attacks can help Obama. Voters are so turned off by this kind of crap.

are those Wolfson comments real or snark? i seriously cannot tell anymore.

i love the fact that the Clinton campaign is reduced to this kind of Bushian bullshit to make their case. i can only hope that the American public is smarter this time around than to fall for this utter tripe.

the same attack is leveled against both men, and they both defend themselves similarly. after comparing notes, their responses become even more similar. wow, its not even a non-issue.

Sorry. The comments I attribute to Howard are pure parody (at least insofar as I'm aware). Should've made that more clear, I suppose. I thought I was going so far over the top that there wasn't much room for doubt, but I guess that's a tough hurdle to clear these days.

LOL. Yes, the high hurdle looks more like a pole vault these days. There is no such thing as a low blow when you are a desperate campaign team.

That was pretty good actually. You had me going for a second there.

But what I'm most concerned about is that the public has an expectation that Sen. Obama's words are his own.

Give the public some credit. I think most people understand taht Hillary and Obama don't write every word in the speeches they give. They have speech writers, consultants, advisors, etc., to help them put together the best speeches possible. And obviously they don't credit every writer, every advisor, every friend, or their spouses. Half the speech would be dedicated to footnotes.


But here's the best part. On being told that Patrick had said that Obama was using those words with permission, Wolfson trots out the lamest of lame responses:

"So I think it's fine that Deval Patrick said that," Wolfson said. "But what I'm concerned about is that the public has an expectation that Sen. Obama's words are his own."

Right. He recognizes that the accusation is baseless, but he's "concerned" that the public might get the wrong impression.

Just about all politicians use speech writers without giving them credit. A great speech writer does not necessarily make for a great speech. Vision Bush reciting Shakespeare.

Much of a great speech has to be credited to a great speaker and his delivery of the message.

Obama is a great speaker.

I don't think he thought up "Yes We Can" all by himself either. Hhmmmmmmm

Am I supposed to be taking this seriously because I really only find it amusing.

"Yes we can!"

Don't you know that was plagiarized from the the Little Engine that Could?
My my my. What will he stoop to next? Maybe he'll plagiarize from the Bible -- say something like "Do unto others..." and not cite God?
Oh, but Huckabee doesn't plagiarize because he cites God all the time.

I'm starting to think Hillary could lose Texas. I'm not buying the argument that her superdelegate strategy is working either:
http://ruralvotes.com/thefield/?p=642

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Oh brother, they are flailing around saying the silliest things. I guess he plagerized his kindergarten essay as well. Desperation. I guess they have finally realized the texas situation and it ain't looking pretty.

It's desperation all right. Do you think there's any chance, though, that people will buy the "plagiarism" thing? After all, have you seen the pathetic clip from Ohio in which Hillary tried to start a chant of "Yes we will!" and the crowd refuses?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRQD-MsSpfI


Humiliating.

So why is it the least bit questionable that Gov. Patrick, an Obama supporter who whom Obama campaign adviser also advised, offers suggestions for Obama stump speeches. Axelrod, a former political reporter, is well kown for his turning of a phrase.

Just out of curiosity: how much of this is intentional?

Let me explain.

Obama has the same Communications Director as Deval Patrick: David Axelrod. In fact, I read a piece in the LA Times a few days ago (I'd link it if I could find it) explaining that Axelrod pushed using the "politics of aspiration" in the 2006 Massachusetts gubernatorial race, as he is this time around with Obama.

Does anyone know if the same speechwriters are at work here? That would go a long way towards explaining this whole thing.

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All of it is intentional. All of it is approved.

I don't believe that Jon Favreau (Obama's sole speechwriter) worked for Patrick, but it wouldn't surprise me in the least if Patrick simply forwarded his speech once the Clinton camp whipped out this new line of attack.

Wait, Jon Favreau? The one who wrote and played Mikey in Swingers alongside Vince Vaughn?

It's clear that the Clinton campaign has gotten to the "nothing to lose" phase of the death spiral. I can only imagine how silly the debate is going to be on Thursday.

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What's up with TPM? I mean, maybe it's nitpicking, but you've sort of buried the relevant points -- Patrick approves and they've developed their ideas in symbiosis -- after the jump, inside a paragraph, below the YouTube embeds. That's kind of lame.

This story about Barack Obama and Deval Patrick, this is both an old story and a bogus one.

The story is from almost a year ago. Ok? So that Hillary is pushing this now is pathetic. But what is more pathetic is that obviously Patrick and Obama are part of the same stream, friends in the same movement, and they are HAPPILY sharing their words and themes. That's the WHOLE IDEA!

Hillary's just angry because none of her friends like sharing, I guess.

Obama used the words "the" and "election" too in his speeches! Hold the presses!

Dear Mr. Kleefeld,

Here is a link to the Boston Globe piece from LAST APRIL about the Obama & Patrick teams' long standing ties.

http://www.boston.com/news/nation/articles/2007/04/16/patrick_obama_campaigns_share_language_of_hope/

Slow news day.

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I was going to add that link! You beat me to it!

My favorite section:

At the same time, Patrick's and Obama's campaigns have been sensitive about mirroring each other too closely.

Obama, in his Senate race, used the well-worn phrase "Yes, we can!" as a rallying cry.

After Patrick employed the same phrase at a state Democratic Convention in 2005, a reporter alerted the campaign that it was Obama's signature line, and they went back to the drawing board, said Dan Payne, a Democratic strategist working for Patrick at the time. (Patrick would adopt "together we can" instead.)

Word has it that Obama has also been advocating that people NOT vote for Hillary Clinton.

Can we get a story on that, please?

Obama shouldn't even bother with this. ATTACK!

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This boomerang is already on its way back to bite her.

Maybe not in 2004, but after eight years of Bush, voters readily see through these twisting tactics.

Hillary would do better talking more about how great she is, instead of so much about how awful her opponent is.

Especially when the negatives she throws at him are so... insignificant and easily refuted.

Good gravy! You know, I'm thinking more and more that it would be a blessing for Sen. Clinton if she does lose this nomination. Then she'll have every reason to show Penn, Wolfson and the Big Dog himself the door and get on with the quite credible reputation she was building - when she was left alone by these types!! - in the Senate. She has to know, in her heart, that this is an embarassing bunch of crap that demeans *her* - not Obama.

(BTW, Deval Patrick has issued a statement saying that this and other themes have been discussed between him and Sen. Obama for years. They often share ideas and approaches and he does not feel in any way that he was being 'copied.')

Elizabeth2,

I couldn't agree with you more! My God, her campaign team has failed her so badly!!! She SHOULD have been a much stronger candidate than she has been, and much of the fault for her campaign's troubles should be attributed to their "strategist," Mark Penn.

I just read publius's (Obsidian Wings) remarks about another HUGE HOLE in Penn's "strategery":

http://obsidianwings.blogs.com/obsidian_wings/2008/02/theyre-not-a-ma.html

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The way I see it, she has not been failed by her campaign team. She is responsible for the performance of that team and she failed to put a good one together. In the bigest leadership role of her life she is an abject failure.

You know, I do not think that her campaign has been nearly the failure that so many claim it is. All (or at least nearly all) campaigns make a few mistakes in a campaign season. Look, for instance, at John McCain. What usually separates the winners from the losers is the ability of a candidate to pick him/herself up after the mistake and get back on track. The problem for Sen Clinton is not that she has run a bad campaign; in most any other year this would have been perceived as a very good campaign. Rather, the problem for her is that Obama has run a flawless and outstanding campaign. In other words, I do not think that this reflects badly on Sen Clinton, but it does reflect very well on Sen Obama.

Her campaign is starting to veer into dangerous territory with this and campaign finance attack - they are trying hard to hurt him big time, and it was cause a backlash from the superdelegates. Ted Kennedy supported Obama in part because of Bill's attacks, and warned Bill not to try to wound Obama so much that Obama wouldn't be a good general election candidate. I think we'll now see more of the same from other superdelegates and party leaders. The Clintons won't be allowed to win dirty and they'll forfeit their remaining chance to get back into the race if they try.

I think this is what is referred to as being "nibbled to death by ducks"

Today is a vicious attack day from the Clinton front on Obama. Be it on this story, to the pro-Clinton folks at MyDD talking about Obama spending money in Florida (they don't say on what) and Jerome Armstrong taking on the idea that we Obama supporters are acting like cult members.

This is depressing. If Obama can survive this, no doubt he can survive the General Election.

It really is pathetic to see Bill and Hillary Clinton succumb to this level.

The simple fact is that Obama is recycling portions of Patrick's speech without credit.
It doesn't matter that Patrick says it's OK; after all we aren't talking a lawsuit here.
The charge works because it attacks Obama on his top selling points, his words and his honesty, his authenticity.
Obama should now simply say "yes I used someone else's speech as my own".
Will he man up or will he blame the writers? Or blame HRC for pointing it out.
I'm guessing the latter until that no longer works.

It is like the weak charges of his reneging over public campaign finance reform; the criticism works in the same way by attacking him on his claimed strengths. He is trying to be too clever by half.

Well as it turns Clinton "just words" criticism of Obama was lifted from Gov. Patrick's opponent.

http://www.politico.com/news/stories/0208/8570.html

And I see nothing at all wrong with her using the line, though I think it is a very weak argument.

The plagiarism charge is really, really silly.

You are right, the charge is beyond silly.
But it is accurate.
And there's the rub.


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JTHB,

Not without credit: Obama and Patrick have been sharing ideas for years. It would be hard to know what comes exactly from whom.

Obama's top selling points are not his words.

This is his best selling point: his ability to inspire, organize and accomplish. This he does through his words, his ideas, his plans, his policies, his inclusive demeanor, his independence and honesty, his management and organizing skills, his judgment, his beliefs, his faith in the people...

That is, he inspires, organizes and accomplishes with his substance.

He is also a good speaker with great speech writers.

In speeches, hardly anything is new under the sun by now. But of course, you are entitled to keep twisting.

So now I ask you:

After noticing how well it worked for Barack, is Hillary's use of the words "change" and "hope," plagiarism?

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The one thing that should be noted about this latest smear is that it is right out of the Rove/Swiftboat school of politics of attacking your oponents strengths. Yet again we see that the Hillary campaign wants to continue the divisive politics of the Bush/Clinton/Bush era instead of bringing us to the 'promised land' of a UNITED States of America.

I'm sorry, but who doesn't attack their opponents' strengths? Hillary runs on experience and Obama attacks it by saying it's "status-quo" experience. Will you please quit whining?

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I live outside of Boston and have appreciated the similarities between Patrick and Obama. Both I think understand how to run a campaign that plays on emotion and images- they are both attacked for it by Democrats who seem to have a desire to lose. Elections are won on this kind of rhetoric- not on nitty gritty policy details. It is a sad part of our politics- but the truth. I am impressed with Obama's ability to use high minded rhetoric and when it comes down to legislation time- he knows his stuff and is good with the details- he knows he doesn't need the rhetoric in meetings and he doesn't need the policy details at a rally.

Still... it seems to me that the Clinton campaign is not just pointing out that the two are using the same words--- I think this is another attempt to show us that Obama is black. After all- he tries to be above race (as does Patrick) and this is perhaps a reminder to all those white voters who are uncomfortable with black leaders that Obama on his own may be fine- but there are MORE of THEM coming.... Maybe I am paranoid- but I just have come to expect this type of thing from the Clintons....

Yes, you are paranoid. I'm sure if he'd used a portion of a speech from a white politician, the same argument would be made.

And no, I do do not think that anyone is criticizing Obama for quoting the FDR, JFK, and MLK. Those phrases are so well known in our culture that I do not believe it is necessary to attribute them. However, when you compare the portion of his speech to Patrick's, it is indisputably the same. And yes, he is entitled to make that argument, but I do think it is disingenous for him to say it now, as if it is a new argument he is making, when it appears that he and Patrick discussed this defense quite a while back and he has simply been waiting until he needed to use it.

The ability to defend Obama on absolutely anything is insane. He somehow has a trademark on the slogan "Yes we can," (which he also borrowed), and people jump all over Hillary for appropriating it ("Yes, she can," "yes, we will," etc.)

But for Obama to OBVIOUSLY use a portion of someone else's speech, even with his permission, well, that's totally defensible because...well, I guess because he's Obama.

How do you factor in Deval's response to your calculations?

Obama could have said, "Like my great friend Deval Patrick said, 'Words do matter.'" But he didn't do that. That would sort of mess with the oratorical flow of his speech. But I think the larger point is that, with or without the permission of Deval Patrick, Obama used a portion of a speech that was not his own. And he seems to be running on the platform that not only is he all about change and a new kind of politics, but he practically invented the concept.

Wow, this is a thunderously dumb ad.

First, I think the charge is more than a bit of a stretch, given the open ties between the Obama and Patrick camps. I also really doubt, in this age of speechwriters, anyone cares. More importantly, why on earth would the HRC campaign pay money to reinforce (x2!) one of her opponent's primary lines of argument? Maybe I'm just not a campaign supergenius, and so the subtlety escapes me, but this seems pretty stupid.

Politicians rarely speak in their own words. They have speechwriters. I doubt Patrick originally wrote the words himself, and if he wants to share them with Obama, that's his decision. HRC's campaign needs to get a clue.

My God, Hillary just looks more pathetic every time she or her surrogates open their mouths. I sure hope Obama vanquishes her soon so this can end.


The words that Patrick and Obama cite were words spoken by great men and well-tested leaders. They carried the weight of their speakers' actions and reputations. Conversely, words spoken by Patrick and Obama are, by and large, just that: words. The speakers bring little to the table to back them up and invest them with power. The fact that their words are so interchangeable further highlights their essential emptiness.

On a more personal level, I found the speaking style in both video excerpts to be rather whiny and self-conscious. Where do people get the notion that Obama is some kind of second-coming of King and Kennedy? Certainly not from his voice. And didn't leading with "I Have a Dream" sound really contrived and weird? It fell completely flat. He should have cribbed verbatim from Patrick.

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What is the desperate Clinton campaign thinking?
Is this the best they can do to give the voters a choice?

And now Bill is off the deep end again, waging negative attacks across Texas. I guess he ran short on positive, persausive material about Hillary.

Hillary and her campaign are turning into a cartoon.

Bill Clinton does not want his wife to become President. His ego could not stand it.

He intentionally sabotaged his wife's support from African Americans.

Bill knows that if his wife became President, then she would dominate the history books, and he would only get a small foot note about how she overcame all the baggage that he packed for her to tote.

Think about it. If she turned out to be a great two term president that would diminish his time in office.

On the other hand, if Hillary was a terrible president, and got turned out by the voters, then history would consider "The Clinton era" to have been complete disaster, and so would the Democratic Party.

Bill Clinton does not want Mrs. Clinton to become President.

This story is much more subtle than people are giving it credit for.

If Obama wasn't worried about the plagiarism charge, then he wouldn't go to such lengths to excuse it.

Advantage Clinton.

Come on, JTHB. Are Clinton's words all written by her? Has she not copied Obama's phrases - WITHOUT authorization?

I was getting to the point of thinking I might vote for Clinton in the general election if she wins the nomination - but I won't do it if she wins ugly. I was fed up with Bill by '96 (but held my nose and voted for him anyway, because what was the alternative?), but this time I'm not sure I can do it. It's pretty clear to me that this is a not-so-subtle attempt to show that both Obama and Patrick are black. Nothing they do is without calculation.

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I didn't look at the ad, and I am an Obama supporter, but why wouldn't this work?

I'd say, if I were the Clinton campaign, "My opponent just gives a lot of speeches...and it turns out, even they aren't original..."

I'd say this is definitely a possible advantage for Clinton.

The thing is Patrick's opponent made the same criticism of him as Obama's opponent made of Obama. So they both responded in the same way. Obviously he borrowed it. But it's such a good comeback why shouldn't he use it? Unlike Biden who had a problem in '88 because his speech was factually incorrect, the Clinton's objection here seems to bethat Obama's response is too damaging.


To me it sounded more like he was quoting. Obama's a great orator, and if the Hillary campaign attack him saying he's all words, then of course he's going to respond by giving a speech quoting great people and speeches, and then ask, "just words?".

He say's it himself: We have nothing to fear but fear itself. just words, just speeches.

I don't SLEEP! The MEDIA wants me to SLEEP. WAKE UP.

Just listen to Hillary speak. It will work far better than Sominex for you. Take Hillery speak tonight and sleep.


To me it sounded more like he was quoting. Obama's a great orator, and if the Hillary campaign attack him saying he's all words, then of course he's going to respond by giving a speech quoting great people and speeches, and then ask, "just words?".

He say's it himself: We have nothing to fear but fear itself. just words, just speeches.

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Eric: this is not an "act of plagiarism" as you so credulously report. It was a suggestion from Deval Patrick and it came with his endorsement. Coming from the candidate who recently tried to steal Obama's "yes we can" line, I find this attack laughable.

If words matter (and are seemingly all that matter for Obamatrons), then doesn't it matter whether they are your own words or not. Nobody is claiming copyright infringement here. Just that the guy has based his entire campaign on the fact that he can give good speeches. It is pretty relevant, then, that his speeches are not his own.

What's really amazing is that Obama folks so much time and energy defending him on these piddly charges and comments from Hillary staffers than they do actually drawing distinctions between the records of the two politicians. While you guys are suckered into complaining about Mark Penn, Wisconsin and Texas and Ohio voters are just hearing "buzz buzz buzz ordinary politician buzz buzz buzz".

All this bickering helps drag Obama down to the level of mere mortals and ordinary politicians. If voters see a messiah vs. senator, they are going to vote for the messiah. If they are just comparing two senators--two ordinary politicians--then Obama stands no chance.

Most voters aren't reading the comment sections in a blog but out in the media they certainly do see evidence that at least one politician is just the same old kind of politician we've grown tired of.

***yawn*** scandalous....outrageous....zzzzzzzzzz

Seriously, that's what the Clinton camp came up with? Laughable.

People:

It's not plagiarism unless the originator claims plagiarism.

Patrick doesn't have a problem with it. At worst, his permission was only implied.

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I've heard this a bit, and it's just not true—in academia, that is. In politics, the rules are obviously much looser (just as they were in academia 100+ years ago).

Still, I don't want anyone to think that if this were in a medium where acts of plagiarism actually lead to firings or dismissal that simple "permission" is enough to dismiss it. It's actually possible to be guilty of self-plagiarism in academia, and I suspect you're always willing to give yourself permission for such an act.

Really? That's it? Deval says they share ideas and strategies. If she makes too much of this she's going to look even more foolish than she already does.

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I am posting this link again with full attribution to DirkVA (February 18, 2008 12:03 PM) who posted it above.

It is Hillary trying BE Obama and it is very funny and very sad. Will we laugh ouselves silly? "YES WE WILL", say it again Hillary.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRQD-MsSpfI

how often does Hillary get up and say "we should focus on the issues". can Clinton supporters really call this, or any of the other nonsense her campaign has shat out in the past few days, an issue?

its the same strategy as New Hampshire. wait until about 48 hrs before the vote, then spew as much bullshit as possible and hope some of it sticks on voters before the opposing campaign can address it.

the very last thing we as a country need is more of this.

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JTHB,

Not without credit: Obama and Patrick have been sharing ideas for years. It would be hard to know what comes exactly from whom.

Obama's top selling points are not his words.

This is his best selling point: his ability to inspire, organize and accomplish. This he does through his words, his ideas, his plans, his policies, his inclusive demeanor, his independence and honesty, his management and organizing skills, his judgment, his beliefs, his faith in the people...

That is, he inspires, organizes and accomplishes with his substance.

He is also a good speaker with great speech writers.

In speeches, hardly anything is new under the sun by now. But of course, you are entitled to keep twisting.

So now I ask you:

After noticing how well it worked for Barack, is Hillary's use of the words "change" and "hope," plagiarism?

BTW, as a former English teacher, this hardly rises to the level of plagiarism, and that word should not be used.

Obama cited historic, well-known speeches and then said, "Just words?"

Two words can't be plagiarized. But thanks for playing, Hillbots.

Obama has clearly taken a riff, both words and meaning, from Patrick's speech without credit. And surely Obama is aware of it all.
If Obama did not so pride himself on his rhetoric, make it so central to his campaign, no one would care. But he does.
And it is plagiarism with or without Patrick's OK.
It is Obama's lack of acknowledgment that he has lifted so major an element of his speech from someone else that makes it so.

JoshL, to ordinary non-English-teacher types, plagiarism = "stealing." So, the takeaway message is simply: Obama steals. Get it?

BTW, as a former English teacher, this hardly rises to the level of plagiarism, and that word should not be used.


Oh Really, I know several English professors who disagree with this. Its not the fact that he took phrase from well known speaches but he lifted the taking of the speeches and the content from a speech not so well known and gave the impression that they were his own. All he would have had to do was say like my friend Patrick said .... I know several students who have recieved a failing grade for this stuff. The thing is that is not original and Plagerism is not just when the orininal person claims it you morans. Try this in an academic world and it would be labeled as such even though The original person never knew of it. Plagerism is taking something that is not your work and by either rephrasing or verbatium passes it off as your own.

The posts here make me realize why we have a problem at our University with Plagerism. Many of you don't have a clear understanding and since Joshl was an English teacher it is even more clear. I Know a Speech perfessors who who has been putting forth this criticism of Obama for a while now. The "urgency of now" while a part of a well known speech is not the most remembered part of the I have a dream and by academic standards this stuff would result in a failure if it was not attributed correctly.

Also interesting that though the HRC campaign is shocked by this IP transgression, it has never brought up that "yes we can" is, stop the presses, pretty clearly meant to be a riff on Cesar Chavez.

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Didn't Hillary plagiarize the "her" mentioned in Deval's clip when she claimed all we heard are words? Neither Bill Clinton nor Senator Clinton, gave reference to the "her" that went after Deval Patrick.

So if people are supposed to give attribution in their speeches when will Senator Clinton be crediting Obama for all the themes and phrases she has stolen over the past few months.

And maybe I'm slow but I don't get this broken campaign funding promise thing. He's not the nominee yet and this isn't the general election yet, so how can any promise be broken. Unless Clinton is stepping asside?

And when is Hillery going to give proper attribution for having taken much of her words from Sesame Street.

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None of you really get it, do you? I agree that the 'charge of plagiarism' seems petty: silly, on it's face. I would not have raised the issue in opposition to his candidacy, as Senator Clinton's campaign representative has chosen to.

But, you're not paying attention. This is not about lifting someone else's words without attribution. It is about a lack of authenticity, a clear attempt at portrayal of the candidate as an original, strong, and independent thinker, one offering new, exciting, hereforeto undisclosed 'big ideas', the skilled orator…

In reality, Senator Obama shares more in common with a fundamentalist revival tent preacher: lots of flash, and not much defensible, demonstrable substance. Great with canned phrases, prepared speeches and when assisted by teleprompters, but short on substance and not a skilled extemporaneous speaker.

Even the 'Si, se puede!' line is lifted from the 2004 efforts of the SEIU to support the candidacy of Governor Dean, itself borrowed from Cesar Chavez, the great organizer of predominantly Chicano migrant farm workers.

Look behind the curtain…

1)To the critic of plagiarism: "Well, Hillary, you are doing all the time with my speeches and ideas, and I never gave you permission, while Patrick did"
2) Tho the critic about his pledge to McCain: Hillary, this is between McCain and me, you were not invited in this discussion"

more Rovian strategy in play here. good luck, CLINTONites, attacking BARACK OBAMA on a lack of authenticity.

is it not odd that most of Hillary's offensive campaign directed at Obama has been centered around the premise "he's just as bad as i am!"?

Mrs Bill Clinton asks that Senator Obama take public financing in the General Election.

Isn't that a nomination concession speech by Mrs. Bill Clinton! Why else would she be asking Senator Obama to take public financing in the presidential competition against John McCain.

Mrs. Bill Clinton?

Sexist moron. Who cares what you think?

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OK, Hillary, I'll make you a deal. I'll write you a speech--and you don't even have to give me credit:

It will begin like this: "I am so proud to be here today, to stand here with so many friends who have been with me for so long. After pouring my heart and soul into this campaign, I have concluded that the voters were looking for a different kind of candidate...one who truly represents a break from the past and who came with a lot less baggage. I am proud of the campaign we waged. Sadly, I realized I couldn't win."

There are lots of classy concession speeches out there, Hillary. And nobody will hold it against you if you borrow some of the words.

Ha! I believed it too. I was going to write back a parody comments, accusing Obama of not being candid about piloting his own campaign jet.

The Clinton version of "it's okay if I do it, just not him":

"In a conference call just now the Clinton campaign would not guarantee that Sen. Hillary Clinton, D-NY, has never used someone else's rhetoric without crediting them.

I asked Clinton communications director Howard Wolfson and Rep. Jim McGovern, D-Mass, if they could assure the public that neither Clinton nor McGovern has ever done what Sen. Barack Obama, D-Illinois, did when he used the rhetoric of Gov. Deval Patrick without footnoting him.

They would not.

In fact, Wolfson seemed to say it wouldn't be as big a deal if it were discovered that Clinton had "lifted" such language. "Sen. Clinton is not running on the strength of her rhetoric," Wolfson said.

No well-informed person could dismiss Obama's campaign as nothing but empty words. It's a meme that HRC's campaign is trying hard to push, along with the laughable charges of plagiarism (as if politicians write their own speeches anyway!) and the whole inane "cult" business, but both are false to the core.

If HRC gets the nomination, she can't win on November without Obama's supporters--it just isn't mathematically possible.

So she (and her supporters) had best think twice before insinuating that Obama supporters are empty-headed Kool-Aid drinkers who respond to pretty speeches like Pavlov's dog. You cannot throw a very large, very diverse, very well-informed group of Democratic supporters under the bus in that way and then expect to win a general election with them.

From today's Chicago Tribune.
Read what Senator Obama said about the subject, and you will see that this is "Much ado about nothing". Some guy named Shakespeare is credit with first writing those words. I thought I better make that clear, so that Mrs.Bill Clinton did not throw another hissy fit.February 18, 2008
Obama says he should have given Patrick credit
Posted at 1:06 PM

by John McCormick

NILES, Ohio – Sen. Barack Obama said today that he should have given credit to his friend, Deval Patrick, when he used language very similar to some used by the Massachusetts governor in 2006.

"I was on the stump, and, you know, he had suggested that we use these lines," Obama said at a news conference a few minutes ago. "I thought they were good lines, I'm sure I should have [given him credit], didn't this time."

Obama said became a bit defensive when asked by a reporter whether his words were his own.

"Now hold on a second. I mean, look here, I've written two books. Wrote most of my speeches," he said. "So, I think putting aside the question you just raised in terms of whether my words are my own, I think that would be carrying it too far. Deval and I do trade ideas all the time, and, you know, he's occasionally used lines of mine. I at a [Jefferson-Jackson] dinner in Wisconsin used some words of his. And, you know, I would add that I know Sen. Clinton on occasion has used words of mine as well."

Obama said he frequently gives credit to others for ideas or language he has gotten from others. "I'm happy to give Deval credit, as I give to a lot of people for spurring all kinds of ideas," he said.

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Thanks for the quote, Liam.

Very classy answer by him; it simply dissolves into dust the non-issue that was thrown at him.

Okay guys. Professional courtesy -- I deal with plagiarism, etc in my job. This is pretty pathetic on Clinton's part -- definitely not plagiarism by any standards. In fact, it is rather similar to the riffs that Clinton copped from Michelle Obama's speeches (the child part) in his Friday night address in Madison. Quoting this way is very acceptable -- indeed you would probably find 100s of simlar examples. Hillary -- don't do this to yourself.

And speaking of honesty -- JUST WHAT IS IN THOSE TAX RETURNS that the CXlintons don't trust us with!!!

Memo to AlwaysTip: It doesn't matter what you do professionally. I deal with plagiarism in my line of work too—BFD. What matters is how this charge is interpreted by the voters (i.e., lay people) who haven't voted yet (who, btw, very likely don't give a shit about what you do for a living, or the dictionary or legal definitions of plagiarism).

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This isn't even new. Obama used those same words in a speech last spring and people whined he was plagiarizing then and Patrick said that he was cool with it, since they share words.

Talk about short memories. Seems people have officially moved to Groundhog Day.

can anybody what the hell is this??!!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sVeFVtcdSYY

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Telaensarto,

It looks like a copy of this other one posted a year ago:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c_wRb8J_bjM&feature=related

In the link breaks, search under "Fringe candidate limo sex & drug party."

From Politico:

A co-chairman of Hillary's Michigan campaign and has a line that's sure to drive a whole bunch of red state governor's up the wall:

"Superdelegates are not second-class delegates," says Joel Ferguson, who will be a superdelegate if Michigan is seated. "The real second-class delegates are the delegates that are picked in red-state caucuses that are never going to vote Democratic."

These people are desperate. They also won't hesitate to throw entire regions of the country under the bus if they have the temerity vote against them.

Yes, I used to like Charlie Parker, but then I learned he never once stopped the show to credit David Raskin when he quoted Laura in a solo (a lot more often than Obama channels Deval Patrick).

So I guess that just shows Bird was not really such a great musician after all, huh?

give me a break.

I have to think the Clinton folks have a worse estimation of the state of the race than the numbers we can see suggest. They're not just flailing, they're obviously flailing. It's as though the onside kick is the only thing left in the playbook. They seem to have decided to try anything, even at the risk of looking like a desperate loser.

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Check out ALL the facts of this story:

http://politicalticker.blogs.cnn.com/

Hillary is copying Obama's own words.

LOL LOL !!

Wow, how inspiring! (cheers, woooo, applause, cheers, applause, wooo) cry the sheep....

LOL

Wow, Obama really knows how to plagarize words. Everyone from Duval Patrick and Martin Luther King back to the Declaration of Independence!

(And not to mention much of Hillary's plans.)

LOL
Rae

Damn, you beat me to it.

It was the source of much amusement over the weekend among my fellow Obama-supporters.

Desperation is not pretty.

On an entirely unrelated topic, why does the site recognize me as me when I get here, then ask again for a password when I attempt to post (or reply), and then return a "password invalid" reply?

Obama's response is the appropriate response to the nonsense that is coming form Clinton. What better response then to quote other famous orator-Presidents, to discount the notion that oratory skills preclude your ability to be a substantive President. My God, we are about to end eight years with the inarticulate guy-you-want-to-have-a-beer-with. There are only so many ways to counter the Clinton nonsense. The fact that others have used the same argument before doesn't matter. The Clintons are in the process of throwing up anything they can hoping something will stick. Idealist, plagarist, flip-flopper, Iraq war supporter, what's next? Regarding Obama's idealism: anyone remember the presidential candidate from Hope, Arkansas?

Actually the people who vote are letting us know what they think. For the moment (and it can all change)they seem to be shifting towards Obama and away from Clinton. As I intimated, a trumped up, rather pathetic charge of plagiarism won't stop the momentum of this campaign. A new openness on Clinton's part (whom I will vot for in November if need be) would help the mechanics of her campaign enormously. Ergo, they should show us the tax returns and where the Clintons get their money. That way, there will be no surprises for the Republican attack machine to play with.

I think the importance of this minor charge of plagiarism is not that it alone will stop Obama's momentum. It has, however, tripped him up, because it's basically a true charge. It successfully nails a negative to him, a negative that he hasn't effectively shrugged off. Obama compounded the problem by admitting he used Deval's words, and suggests by their "friendly sharing" that he does it all the time.

So, this dovetails with Kevin Hassett's accusation about Obama's "plagiarized" economic plan:

The fact is that Obama’s plan today is the most shameless piece of potential plagiarism that I have ever seen. He basically took Clinton’s words and Clinton’s policies and called them his own. If I were a professor I’d give him an F and try to get him kicked out of school for something this terrible.

This charge is not going to go away.

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This "plagiarism" bullshit is the lamest yet. The Clinton campaign is so old-school. The train has left the station: we don't want the Clintons or any other old Dems around any more, it's time for something completely new. Obama is the one. Hillary should drop out now and get ready to be named to the Supreme Court, where she could actually do a helluva lot of good!


As I recall, the Hillary campaign did not use
the word "Change" until after Iowa. They kept
using "strength and experience" back then ...
even Maya Angelou's endorsement sounds very
much like it was written by a campaign staff,
emphasizing "strength and experience".

Once they realized "change" is what the voters
want to hear, they started using "change",
and even "yes we can".


~ Jess

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One obvious difference with what Obama did and Hillary's use of "Fired up, ready to go" is that no one on God's earth would have failed to realize that Hillary was not the first to use the phrase. Hillary was certainly not pretending to be their originator. Moreover, Hillary is NOT predicating HER candidacy in very large measure on her effectiveness as a speaker, and her persuasiveness in her use of rhetoric to inspire people.

The morally disturbing thing about Obama's plagiarism is not so much that he lifted the rhetoric from somewhere else, but that he pretended it was his own.

How can you claim to authenticity in your message and your appeal if you copy from other sources and pretend it's your own material?

The real irony is in the exact content of what Obama stole. The whole point of the passage he lifted from Patrick is that words are important, the rhetoric is important. And yet, the very words he employs are not his own, but someone else's.

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Obama needs to develop a standard response, something like: "As my campaign gains more and more support, Bill and Hillary Clinton and their team seem to get more and more desperate. I would prefer to stay focused on the issues. I want to look to the future, to inspire unity in a nation that wants unity again. I don't want to stop and respond one by one to the constant stream of attacks from team Clinton."

"I want to stay focused on the issue of change. And hope. And hope and change. Yes we can. Hope. And also change. Those are the issues."

Give me a break.

fabooj said: This isn't even new. Obama used those same words in a speech last spring . . .

Um, that's an even worse defense than "it's not technically plagiarism" or "they're good enough friends to share Patrick Deval's best lines."

It says not only are Obama's words unoriginal, but he can't even come up with any new words (of his own) in a year's time.

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Back in '88, a videotape of Joe Biden interspersed with footage of British Labour Party leader Neil Kinnock was circulated among the press corps by the Dukakis campaign. The videotape proved that Biden had plagiarized parts of Kinnock's speech (Biden explicitly claimed the thoughts as his own in the text of the speech). The revelation ended Biden's bid for the Democratic nomination.

When it became public knowledge that the tape had been compiled and circulated at the instruction of Dukakis' then campaign manager, John Sasso, he was fired by the campaign.

This begs the question, when will Hillary do the right thing and fire Wolfson for doing essentially the same thing as Sasso (with the exception that Obama is innocent whereas Biden was guilty)?

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Hillary's attack is Rove Politics 101, attack your opponent on his strength and your weakness. Obama's inspiring oratory is something Hillary cannot even approach, so she must turn it into a negative by claiming it is hollow, inauthentic and plagerized. It also covers her own borrowing of phrases because such accusations seem retalitory.

Lol. I totally bought it.

How stupid does the Clinton camp think we are?

Truly moronic, and frankly, a little desperate.

What's next, digging up his kindergarten drawings? Oh wait, they did that.

Pot meet kettle. Really, Wolfson should do a little Googling before he starts firing accusations. Ever wonder where Hillary's Super Tuesday "I see an America..." refrain came from? None other than Jimmy Carter: http://www.etsu.edu/cas/history/docs/carterseg.htm. I don't recall her providing any attribution.

Hey undecided voters: remember this negative campaigning. This is your future on Hillary Clinton.

Over to you Jimmy C.

Liam:

Is there a reason you keep spelling Hillary's name incorrectly? I've seen you do it often enough that it seems to be intentional, but I don't understand why you're doing it.

If this is the best Hillary's hacks can come up with then they deserve to fail. I have had my intelligence insulted one too many times in this election and I am really sick of it. They are targeting the idiots out there who don't seem to pay attention to the fact that "speeches and words" have made the Clinton's into multi-millionaires.

It is all stolen. That is the nature of a good speech. What worries me is the Obama reaction to attack at once. Is this the new politics? Wasn´t he suppose to be above this old politics?

When you are swiftboated, history has shown that you have to immediately shoot-to-kill in response. Obama is practicing what has been proven by game theory to be the optimum strategy:

Assume the best of your opponent, but if your opponent treats you ill, return in kind. Then watch opponent's reaction. If ill, return in kind. If reasonable, go back to assuming the best of your opponent.

Seems to be working here, doesn't it?


I don't see any plagiarism at all here but I was, admittedly, disappointed to hear Obama reciting the same speech refrain as someone else. Especially since his very strength is built on his use of words to inspire people.

From my point of view,(knowing the books he's written and all the speeches he's given) this is meaningless.

But I can see how thousands of voters who aren't as familiar with Obama and his extraordinarily original and inspiring thinking might be pretty disappointed.

Especially if they see the Patrick/Obama comparison in a Clinton commercial. This is something Clintons love to sink their teeth into. Going after an opponent's strengths. And repeating it over and over and over again. I'm sure they're already searching everything he's ever said and everything he's ever written to see if they can build on this line of attack.

Again, I think it's absolutely baseless to assert that Obama is not original.

But I wouldn't be surprised if the desperate Clintons ran a national tv ad about this.

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Whenever Hillary goes on the attack all I can think is:

Rocks. Glass Houses. Clintons.

I can't imagine the Clinton's using this as an ad (though, I can't imagine how they just found out about the Texas primary rules this morning). Obama delivers it so much better than Patrick, for sure you don't want to highlight how extraordinary he is in front of a crowd. Plus, three lines out of an entire speech?! That wasn't even the most incredible part of that speech.

Good writers borrow, great writers steal outright.

And it's only plagiarism if you don't get permission to use it. Arguing that Obama should have said "As Deval Patrick said..." is pretty freakin stupid.

"it's only plagiarism if you don't get permission to use it."

That's incorrect. It's only illegal if you don't get permission to use it. In that case, you might be sued in court. But it is still plagiarism to represent someone else's ideas or words as your own. Obama has basically defrauded the American people. And though we can't sue him in court, we can begin to wake up to what he is really all about.

Sure, and he plagiarized "Yes We Can" from the title of Sammy Davis, Jr's 1966 autobiography (somewhat).


plagiarism
pla·gia·rism [ pláyjə rìzzəm ] (plural pla·gia·risms)

noun
Definition:

"The practice of claiming or implying original authorship of (or incorporating material from) someone else's written or creative work, in whole or in part, into one's own without adequate acknowledgment."

Obama not only incorporated Patrick's ideas without acknowledging where they came from, but he used the very same words and examples. Plagiarism means to use someone’s ideas without referencing the source. It makes no difference if the person you are plagiarizing is your political supporter, and they never intend to sue you in court. It is still plagiarism, and Obama is defrauding the American people.

Obama has a rich history of stealing other people's ideas. John Edwards often accused him of doing the very same thing. The point is that Obama is a phoney. He is a fraud. He is not an original thinker - he is a con artist. And the Democratic Party is about to be swindled into the worst political disaster in its long history.

rstephen, I taught college composition and I take plagiarism seriously.

Two words cannot be plagiarized. "Just words?" isn't a long enough string or an original enough thought to warrant a call for attribution.

If two words could be plagiarized, what about one word?

Is HRC a plagiarist every time she uses the word "hope,"?

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Boy, I hope your analytical skills are better than that when it comes to grading college compositions.

Look, It's not only the use of the phrase "it's just words", it's its repetition several times over using essentially the same kind of examples as did Deval. The entire passage is essentially ripped off entirely from Deval's speech.

And the fact that Deval is now retroactively asserting that Obama had his "permission" is meaningless. The real hoax was perpetrated on the entire intended audience of that passage, who believed that the words were Obama's, but were in fact those of another politician.

You'd have to ask KoolAid drinkers like Kurtz on the front page how he can explain away that obvious problem.

It's incredibly disingenuous to say this is about "two words." Obama stole Patrick's idea almost word for word. He used the same words and the same four examples - from FDR, the Declaration of Independence, MLK and JFK. He didn't even bother to make up one of his own.

Well, I guess he's no better than Biden, then.

Except for the Bankruptcy Bill part. And voting for the war. And the charisma.

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From realclearpolitics blog:

Meanwhile, the Clinton campaign is aggressively pushing the notion that irrespective of whether Deval Patrick gave his permission, Obama's failure to credit Patrick and to pass off the words as his own seriously undermines Obama's credibility. Responding to a question about Gov. Patrick's comments to the New York Times, Clinton Communications Director Howard Wolfson said:

"When an author plagiarizes from another author there is damage done to 2 different parties. One is to the person he plagiarized from. The other is to the reader, who has a set of assumptions and expectations that when you read words in a book they are the words of the author unless they are appropriately credited to another party.

So I think it's fine that Deval Patrick said that. But what I'm concerned about here is that the public has an expectation that Senator Obama's words are his own, unless he credits them to someone else. And so when you are running on your rhetoric and the power of your oratory and the words that you are using turnout to be someone else's, I think it undermines a very central and important premise of Senator Obama's candidacy."


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Does anyone else feel that the Clinton campaign would be far better off by locking Howard Wolfson in a closet somewhere?

Although I support Senator Obama, I hold Senator Clinton in high regard. That regard is tested every time I see Howard Wolfson speak on her behalf.

I'm not blind to the fact that any candidate's flack is obligated to recite the campaign's talking points. But Wolfson is so resistant to responding with anything resembling an answer to a question, I have a very difficult time listening to him.

After watching the video comparison and getting interested in Gov. Deval Patrick it got a little disconcerting. Obama is not unique and Patrick does it a little better. Watch the Pass it on clip. He actually gets tears in his eyes. Maybe he should be running instead of Obama?

A question for everyone who sees this:

I think it's pretty safe to assume that the Clinton forces *know* this plagiarism charge is rubbish. Of course they don't admit it; why would they?

One thing I can't divine, however, is whether this is born of desperation on their part or whether they have some reason to think it will work.

Any ideas?

"I think it's pretty safe to assume that the Clinton forces *know* this plagiarism charge is rubbish."

It's pretty safe to assume the Obamatrons can't admit their candidate would do anything unethical. The only crime is in pointing out that he has.

It would be one thing if Obama simply admitted that he should have referenced Patrick in some way while giving a nearly word-for-word recital of Patrick's original speech. But he hasn't done that. Instead, he's used Patrick to cover-up his deception upon the public while demonizing Clinton for pointing it out. These are the actions of a dedicated con artist.

We can assume that Hillary approved of this hit job.

Senator Obama -- In your speech on Super Tuesday, perhaps by coincidence, you used key phrases from a 1984 speech by Jesse Jackson (“Our time has come. Our time has come” DNC), a poem by June Jordan (“we are the ones we have been waiting for” -- “Poem for South African Women”), and a song by Norman Hutchins (“a change is coming”) – but you did not credit any of them for the key lines in your speech. Isn’t this the kind of speechwriting that doomed Joe Biden’s presidential campaign in the 1980s, and why should your speeches be held to a different standard?

Need you really be reminded that Sen. Biden in '88 had lifted, like an empty bottle, an entire speech by Labour Party leader Neil Kinnock and was using it on the stump with only cursory modification?

This isn't similar. It's not even conventionally dissimilar.

It's desperate.

TS -- Here are the facts concerning Sen. Biden, just in case you have an open mind on the subject.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joe_Biden_presidential_campaign%2C_1988

My mind is indeed open, but I see little essential difference in this account from what I wrote; unless you mean the bit about Biden crediting Kinnock in all but the one instance the Dukakis people had on tape.

Again, if Sen. Obama were recycling great swaths of oratory from another speaker, then yeah, not crediting Gov. Patrick would be pretty sleazy; if he'd done it the way Biden did it (actually citing the source), it would be merely pathetic. But he didn't do either. He merely used a rhetorical flourish the two men had swapped between them (I daresay both would be hard pressed to say with any certainty who came up with it first).

This issue is completely silly. However, looking at the CNN site, I notice a large number of comments that seem to go on about how both are whiners, and a large contingent that seems to think it is a big deal. I tend to think CNN is closer to the average voter rather than the political junkie, so it does worry me.

How TPM, even when Barrack is out of line, you write an article that aims to take a shot at Hillary. Am I mistaken, or has TPM endorsed Obama?

The first line of TPM's take on this story: "The Clinton campaign is busy pushing a new line of attack." Talk about slanted reporting.

TPM would do better to buy a dictionary, look up the word "plagiarism," and go from there.

I've been thinking this through for some time now and I'm pretty certain I'm right about this (as you read me, you'll find that I rarely say anything that I haven't thought pretty well through, and refrain from speaking if I do not have a pretty solid rationale for something):

It would be best for the Nation, and the Democratic party if Hillary Clinton would be the Democratic nominee for President in 2008, and Barack Obama in 2016. I know this will hit Obama supporters right between the eyes and stimulate an emotional response, but take a second to think about this and it's hard not to agree with this point of view. Also, understand, I'm not a Clinton insider of any kind. I haven't campaigned for her, I haven't sent her money, I've just been in deep thought on this for a few months now.

So, here is what swayed me;

It is clear to me that we need a prolonged period of Democratic rule to fix the various socio-economic structures that are nicked up right now. (I'd just like to point out that I don't believe I'm understating in saying "nicked up." For the most part we are still a very strong country and very rich, so we really aren't in the disaster recovery mode that some make us out to be.) I believe that we need twelve or sixteen years of Democratic balance of power, primarily to clean up corporate (executive pay, rules abuse, outright fraud) and social corruption (abuse of government programs by free-riders and worthless bureaucrats must be included in the clean-up), regain our moral authority in the international community, realign religion with home-life instead of government influence and rebuild the middle class through a comprehensive education initiative at the youngest levels.

Next, it appears to me that the Democrats really do have two good candidates for the first time in a long time. Each has a flaw however. Hillary Clinton's flaw is the extreme dislike of her from the Evangelical and red-neck right (they like labels, so let's label). Barack Obama's flaw is a little more serious, but more fixable; he's woefully inexperienced, as are his barely tenured advisors. His flaw would likely cause him to lose to McCain in the fall, Hillary's wouldn't.

So, how do we solve our little issue between two good candidates, and get the prolonged period of Democratic balance of power. We need to elect Hillary now, and Barack later. We can do it easily by having the ticket be Clinton/Obama (I don't care if they like each other or not). We can in one fell swoop solve a lot of problems if we run Hillary with Barack as the VP. This would all but guarantee a victory in the fall, and, it would create a presumptive successor to the White House.

http://www.realwisconisinnews.com

For what it's worth, I had a slightly different take on this issue and wrote a lil' blog on it at

http://tpmcafe.talkingpointsmemo.com/talk/2008/02/political-plagiarism.php

Beav,

Talking in terms of the 2016 Election is really besides the point. Who knows what is going on by then? This type of talk tends to be the "peacemaker" talk similar to "dream tickets". It's always the side that's slipping that makes these types of arguments.

But I think I can meet you half-way. How about Obama runs in 2008, and we have Chelsea shadow HRC in the Senate for the next 8 years. And then -- you guessed it -- we run Chelsea in 2016 (she will be eligible!)

You can't steal an unoriginal idea and you can't plagiarize things that are quotations.

So saying "But he lifted the entire passage!" is simply ridiculous, because the bulk of the passage is quotations from other speeches.

Add in the fact that two words can't be plagiarized and the fact that Patrick himself said he encouraged Obama to use this riff, and it's ridiculous.

Then, when you return to the real world and realize that all political speeches crib on the speeches that have come before, that every candidate in this race has lifted ideas and phrases from their earlier campaigns, from each other and from other politicians, and you have what this really is:

A desperate ploy from a fading campaign.

Jon Favreau is Obama's head speech writer, there are two others:

http://www.nytimes.com/2008/01/20/fashion/20speechwriter.html?_r=1&scp=1&sq=Jon+Favreau&st=nyt&oref=slogin

One was an assistant to Sorensen when he was writing his memoirs, and the other helped Lee Hamilton write the Iraq Study Group report.

And the oldest one is 30. Not to shabby

I'm shocked, just when I thought they couldn't get any more pathetic, they raise hell about Obama borrowing an argument from one of his supporters, an argument that many of us have made.

How desperate...it's pathetic it has come to this...I'm so glad she is going to lose this thing, it will feel so good that these tactics won't pay off. I'm tired of these Republican tactics paying off.

"they raise hell about Obama borrowing an argument from one of his supporters, an argument that many of us have made."

Show me 1 person who made the same argument, using the same words, and using the same 4 examples from speeches of JFK, FDR, MLK and the DofI, without any citation. You can't. You know why? Because nobody here is so unethical. Obama gets away with it because he knows his supporters are so fanatical, they can't admit he would do anything wrong. If he admitted to doing wrong it might shake their unreasoning faith in him.

Clinton Campaign: We're in the 21st Century Slogans business. And we believe our slogans and speeches are totally better than Obama's. His slogans are made in China.

If only Obama would stop borrowing clever comebacks and uplifting phrases from JFK and MLK whenever we try to attack him, we could start winning again!

Let's also not forget the big picture:

The day before the Wisconsin and Hawai'i primaries, what do the Clinton camp want folks talking about?

Which issues are they driving home to the voters of those fine states? What's their message?

Oh, yeah. They don't have one. Better attack the other guy.

This is the kind of slimy politics that leads people to embrace the Obama message.

Lord. I think I just threw up a little in my mouth.

The real message behind this goes beyond the bogus issue of "plagarism;" it's Wolfson's line that "Obama is running on the strength of his rhetoric." As if that's his sole contribution. The problem is, people aren't buying the bullshit. Most importantly, while the folks who follow politics closely may have their collective panties in a wad about this latest non-issue, the people who will decide the nomination and the GE will most likely never even hear about this, and if they do, will not care. And that says all that needs to be said about the people running HRC's campaign: they're preahing to the choir. Which is fine, but won't get you more votes. Thus Obama's upward polling momentum, and HRC's ongoing plateau.

Clinton is not my candidate of choice, but she's a smart and capable woman. However, watching the way her campaign has been so grossly mismanaged has to call into question her ostensible ability to manage a complex organization or process. Penn and Wolfson are damaging Clinton far more than Obama could have dreamed of doing - and that's where HRC supporters' anger should be directed.

well i tell u one thing if hillary gets the nomination , ill vote for mcain or maybe i wont vote at all , that is how much i think she and bill are two of the most dishonest , power mongers out there . i think alot more people will probably do the same . she is as good a candidate as not having a "choice"

"well i tell u one thing if hillary gets the nomination , ill vote for mcain or maybe i wont vote at all"

Another cult follower drinking the Koolaid.

Jon Favreau is Obama's head speech writer

Damn! Unfortunate name... I can see how the Clintons will use this to try to tie into the right-wing vote:

OBAMA'S HEAD SPEECH WRITER WAS SCREENWRITER BEHIND HOLLYWOOD MOTION PICTURE 'SWINGERS'


Really dumb move. They should have just made a funny ad out of the two speeches side by side and let it go at that.

who cares who writes the speeches as long as the the candidates core beliefs are within it . surely they cant campaign , travel , raise money , kiss babies, shake hands and be expected to write great speeches

who cares who writes the speeches as long as the the candidates core beliefs are within it . surely they cant campaign , travel , raise money , kiss babies, shake hands and be expected to write great speeches

Obama has billed himself as the "next generation" candidate with fresh ideas, so why is he stealing ideas and words from others including the Clinton campaign.

1) OBAMA copied almost word for word, the "just words" refrain from Duval Patrick.

2) OBAMA is accused of plagiarizing Clinton's economic plan.

3) OBAMA stole the "audacity of hope" book title from Reverend Wright, the paster of his church.

In none of these cases did he provide attribution. He is supposed to be so inspiring but shouldn't he inspire with his own words and ideas? So interesting that he differentiates himself from the baby boomer generation,and particularly Clinton,as the person with fresh ideas while he steals hers.

The real problem with Obama is that he isn't running as a political candidate. He is running as a religious figure, using plagiarized material. None of it is original, but all of it is intended to build up a cult of personality. This is especially effective on gullible young people with an identity crisis of their own.

I think you are right - there is an ageism thing going on here. Generation X is rebelling against their baby-boomer parents (Hillary), the way baby-boomers rebelled against their depression-era parents. At the same time, generation X is jealous because they missed out on the excitement of JFK and LBJ. They are pretending that Obama is the next great leader. But he isn't. He's only a plagiarist.

I have it from an inside source that Obama offered Penn a cabinet position back in early 2007, so don't assume he's as lousy at strategizng as it appears.

Come on, pull the other one! I have trouble believing that.

Spill it! Who is the inside source??? ;-)

Obama also plagerized Clinton's Ecconomic Plan (cited all over the news last week). If you run on rhetoric alone...you better make sure its your own. He is an empty suit....and the suit is starting to look a bit withered at the edges.

He is a horrible example for the students who have latched on to him. As a professor I would expel him or anyone who takes someone's work as his own. I just got an email from a young Obama supporter who was outraged by the fact that he did this. Shame on Obama!!!

Yes! Oh when oh when will the media start holding him accountable. Nowadays, you need to subscribe to Factcheck.org or go straight to Hillary's website for her factcheck section to see how many of Obama's plans copied hers only 3 months later. He sees which plans look good and on the fly he pirates them. That's the kind of candidate he is, someone who will suddenly promise this and that, such as granting licenses to illegal aliens, just to win that week's primaries. That's justr bad politics; he himself doesn't have any thought out plans.

"Obama Plagiarized Speech"?!! Are you kidding me??!!!!!

In a 30-minute speech, Obama borrowed a 15-second riff from a close friend and political ally -- a close friend and political ally who, by the way, borrowed "Yes, we can!" from Obama, who had used it in his 2004 Senate campaign.

This headline is a lie. Change it now.

Shame on you.


It wasn't 15 seconds, it was at least 30 seconds. And it doesn't matter if he borrowed it from a close political ally, or if the close political ally also borrowed something from him. The point is that he used someone else's speech - almost word for word - as if it were his own. That's called plagiarism.

If Deval Patrick were in Obama's employ and working as his speech writer, it would not be plagiarism as long as nobody had ever given the same speech in public before. Or if Patrick's original speech was as well-known to the general public as the words of the Declaration of Independence, then to cite the source would be unnecessary. But when Obama gives a speech in Milwaukee, Wisconsin that is almost the exact duplicate of a speech given by a candidate in the Massachusetts race for governor two years earlier, that is plagiarism.

You write:

[W]hen Obama gives a speech in Milwaukee, Wisconsin that is almost the exact duplicate of a speech given by a candidate in the Massachusetts race for governor two years earlier, that is plagiarism.

Again: We are not talking about "a speech." We are talking about a 15-second riff.

And, yes, it is 15 seconds -- watch the video.

I am so outraged by the videos from the Humane Society about the way these slaughter houses in Ca. have treated these poor cows, that I just feel terrible.

The person who would PLEDGE to put slaughethouses out of business would get my vote, regardless of how I felt about them otherwise.

With all the meat substitutes we have now, why do people have to keep butchering animals anyway!? And to do it with such heatlessness and cruelty is just beyond words.

Rae

You are absolutely right, though you should make the point in a post to your blog. Look. Is there one appointment Bush made that wasn't a disaster for this country? I don't care if it's the FDA, the USDA, defense, attorney general, FEMA, and on and on. We need a President who knows how to GOVERN. Not just someone who knows how to get elected. That's how I'm making my choice in the Fall. I'm not expecting miracles. I just want a President who won't put a government together that ought to be wearing clown suits. 26,000 people died in 2 years because the FDA didn't listen to researchers who were telling them that drugs were killing people. Kids ate that diseased beef in school lunch programs. I'm sick and tired of lofty rhetoric, original or not.

I don't have blog or I would. Not that it would do any good.

I wish SOME CANDIDATE would talk about Animal rights!

They'd get my vote in a heart beat if I believed they were being genuine. Even Obama!!

Rae


I have been saying this for a long time, Obama's authenticity is highly questionable. It is a big of an ugly irony that while Obama attests that his campaign is not just about lofty rhetoric, he is yet using the same lofty rhetoric from another politician. Barack does not write his own speeches, he performs them. He performs the speeches quite well, well enough to pack in the crowds, but he does not write anything he says. Usually, his main speech writer (who is incidientally is the young 26 year old white man Jon Favreau) often lifts various passages the straight out of the speeches spoken during the 60's civil rights era. If that is all Obama has going for him, just a performance, hwo can we truly expect him to bring about change?

Wisconsin, Texas, Ohio, Pennsylvania. The popular vote. Close in WI and takes the other three, Clinton wins. Wins WI and wins any of Texas, Ohio or Pennsylvania, Obama wins. Isn't it that simple? She won't stay in the race if she loses the popular vote in Texas, Ohio or Pennsylvania. He won't stay in the race if it's close in WI and she wins the other three. Hang on. It's almost over. I hear the rich contralto of a big woman warming up to sing.

Yeah. Taylor Marsh has always been....well, spirited. Given to bouts of hyperbole. Sanguine. But lately, I fear she has gone completely off her rocker. She has lost all ability to put things into perspective...or proportion...whatever.

On the other hand, for those of us who are able to maintain cooler heads, I think the protracted primary contest will have some positive effects, too.

Regardless of who your favorite candidate is, it's hard to deny that the Democratic Party is energized! And the longer this lasts, and the more states that are involved (with voters feeling empowered) in this process, the more that energy and enthusiasm spreads. I can't help but think that'll be an advantage going into the GE.

The real problem with Obama is that he isn't running as a political candidate. He is running as a religious figure, using plagiarized material. None of it is original, but all of it is intended to build up a cult of personality. This is especially effective on gullible young people with an identity crisis of their own....They are pretending that Obama is the next great leader. But he isn't. He's only a plagiarist.

***Posts like this one (i.e. "Obama is just a plagiarist/ cult leader/incompetent/unqualified/fluke/fad/etc.") are entertaining. If that's all he is, then Clinton must be totally incompetent for not being able to take him down with all her money, status, experience, connections, and support. You'd think someone who wants to be President could come up with a decent strategy.

"Posts like this one (i.e. "Obama is just a plagiarist/ cult leader/incompetent/ unqualified/fluke/fad/etc.") are entertaining. If that's all he is, then Clinton must be totally incompetent for not being able to take him down."

You've obviously never heard of Jim Jones or David Koresh.

If Barack Obama is David Koresh, then Hillary Clinton is the Keystone Cops!

Not everyone votes for who you vote for. Welcome to the world of Democracy.

Does anyone really think that any candidate for president writes his or her own speeches? I'm sure HRC is laboring over tomorrow's message right now.

So Obama uses Deval's words - no problem. But if Clinton did it? Wow the reaction would have been different. TPM has become an unreliable site for balanced discussion. It is in the Obama camp: you can see it the slant, the focus and the headlines. Let us hope that Obama can win the election without Clinton supporters. I plan to sit this one out. Obama has just got too much of a pass. Not to worry: he has both the MSM and the leftish netroots honchos in his corner. I am sure they can deliver.

Sure, the MSM needs to work harder to report more positive news for Clinton. Especially after she came in a disappointing 3rd in IA, barely won NH, got clobbered in SC, failed to break out on Super Tue ("it'll be over by Feb 5th"), lost 8 contests in a row, and has been firing her staff. Sure, the media is just ROLLING in positive news to report for her (rolling eyes).

On the contrary, Clinton has the MSM to THANK for still being in this race and keeping it as close as it is. She was consistently portrayed as the frontrunner, helped by the fact that they always included her early Super Delegate lead, got a lot of positive spin from winning NH and CA "against the polls which showed Obama ahead" (ignoring the early voting factors), and greatly helped by the media repeating the HRC camp spin regarding "expected" losses or "less significant" states.

If you want to see more positive media coverage for Hillary, rather than "sitting it out" you can always donate more to her campaign and get on the phone bank so maybe she can actually get another win.

So Obama uses Deval's words - no problem. But if Clinton did it? Wow the reaction would have been different.

Oh and btw, she HAS taken lines from other people's speeches including Obama's. Big deal, politicians and musicians do it all the time. It's not like he stole someone's 50 minute speech word for word.

"So Obama uses Deval's words - no problem. But if Clinton did it? Wow the reaction would have been different."

That's because the image fostered by the corporate media is that Clinton is the inauthentic one, while Obama is supposed to be thoughtful and genuine.

If Clinton were to do something like this it would be gleefully held up, and played over and over in the media, as final & conclusive evidence that we can't believe anything she says or does. But when Obama does it, the media looks for ways to excuse, discount, or divert our attention away from the reality of his campaign, by minimizing its importance, and by actually blaming Clinton for bringing it up and attempting to shatter our delusions.

The media-enforced delusion that Obama is a more thoughtful, ethical, and sincere politician is a lie. It is belied by the fact that he consistently plagiarizes the words and ideas of others for his own political benefit. Nothing is more inauthentic than that. Though nothing can force the media to report the truth when it's much easier, and ultimately more profitable for corporate interests, to simply reinforce the delusion - at least for now.

Just keep fostering those nice pet theories.

Thank you, Team Hillary, for helping to make up my mind. Senator Obama has my vote (and you can quote me on that).

rstephen:
"If that's all he is, then Clinton must be totally incompetent for not being able to take him down." You've obviously never heard of Jim Jones or David Koresh.

If Barack Obama is David Koresh, then Hillary Clinton is the Keystone Cops!

Not everyone votes for who you vote for. Welcome to the world of Democracy.

"If Barack Obama is David Koresh, then Hillary Clinton is the Keystone Cops!"

The point is that it's very difficult - not easy - to take down a cult leader in a free society because of the irrational nature of a cult.

Realize that you are referring to millions of folks who have so far voted, as well as roughly half of all Americans if you believe the latest polls.

So the point is, referring to them as a "cult" or Senator Obama as a "cult leader" is clearly a gross misrepresentation of reality. By your reasoning you might as well say that all Christians are in a cult as well.

As for the whole "plagiarism" deal, it's obviously a bigger deal to some than others. As many have pointed out, it was a few short phrases intended to counter one of Clinton's latest attacks. It's not even part of his usual stump speech, and it's not like he stole an entire speech word for word.

Most Americans are smart enough to realize that politicians, just like musicians and rappers, borrow lines and ideas from each other all the time. Nobody expects them to be 100% original in everything they say and do.

Here's a quick way to resolve this argument: If some of you believe that it's such a BIG DEAL and that he's lost TONS of credibility with potential voters then it should be apparent in the results of the upcoming primaries. If he LOSES badly then maybe it was a big deal. If he WINS then it probably wasn't a big deal for many people. How's that?

I counted the identical sentences. Six! He used six same sentences! That is, if you count all the "Just words." as separate sentences.

Inside Edition broke the story this evening. Probably because there was nothing new from Britney, there were no new tots who dialed 911 to save their mother's life, and the skateboard-hating cop story had been dropped to the second slot on the show.

Wow. I just turned on Cspan and Hillary did address animal rights in a speech she gave in Wisc. today. It was more about endangered species, like gorillas in the congo being killed by the violence there.

At least its a start. I'm going to pressure more for this. There is only so much private organizations can do.

We need the ear of the president!

I'm for Clinton, still, but this is pretty stupid.

But I get mixed up about politics. When they caught Biden doing it, they called it "plagiarism," and he was tossed out of the race.

It's not really a good answer for Hillary's charges. She's not criticizing the speeches, she's criticizing the fact that he doesn't fill out the policy wonk stuff -- like Edwards did, and like she does, like it or not. The accusation isn't that Obama's principles are bad, just, let's get to the meat.

Yes, I weally, weally want to not be partisan. Please make all the neocons disappear, Lord, and we won't have to get down and dirty any more.

Look at his Super Tuesday speech...A little throw back to the West Wing anyone?

From The West Wing, “In the Shadow of Two Gunmen (Part 2)”
http://communicationsoffice.tripod.com/2-02.txt

BARTLET [VO]
“Tonight, what began on the commons in Concord, Massachusetts, as an alliance of farmers and workers, of cobbles man and tinsmiths, of statesmen and students, of mothers and wives, of men and boys, lives two centuries later as America!”

Clinton says she has Solutions but the Solution she offered, when it really matterd to millions of lives of young people and to our country, was the Solution and Authorization to go to War --the Iraq War. In the Most Important Policy Decisiion of Our Times, the Iraq War, Hillary Clinton got it Wrong. Her 35 years of experience didn't get it Right then, and that speaks Volumes.....

Let's talk about getting Real. Just because Obama used a few lines from a political advisor and friend for a speech, they now want to muddy and cloud the issues by stating Obama is a Plagarist, which by definition means you are stealing someone's words or lines without their knowlege, which is a very serious Charge. Is that her Solution to make this non-issue into something it's not, to offer more Spin and Illusion, when they know full well exactly what it was and is, and because they too are guilty of the same thing, this borrowing of lines in political discourse and is common practice.

Her solution is to insult the intelligence of every day average, citizens by distorting this situation, which is total hypocrisy, because they too have done the same thing and are doing it NOW. They should apologize to the Country, for turning away from being so-called Real, as she likes to say, to puting out this kind of Slime, Distortion and Illusion into the water, trying to Cloud the issues -- to Cloud Reality! If you are going to raise doubts about an oppenent, it should be about real facts and not about illusions, about truth and not about falsity.

And Words Do Matter, Words are Not Cheap!

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